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I began my life as a little Roman Catholic girl, But after the death of my sister, mother lost faith; And we never, ever went to church anymore, Mother said we did not need the church or God. But I did, I would go to the big church not far, I tiptoed up front to where the candles burned; And I lit some for my sister who was in Nirvana, The good will have a place in Heaven, in Paradise; In the hereafter, the next world, the next life, But if one believes in Heaven, then also Hell. I hold fast the concept of a supreme being, Lord, So, I believe that there is an afterlife in Heaven; I cannot accept anything else, it would destroy me, My beloved have to be waiting in the Firmament. So yes, I am expecting after this realm, Eternity, Once when I was sad, I felt a hand upon me; Once I thought I heard grandma talking, once father. And once my beloved kissed my lips, with his love, There waiting, my babies who never knew the sky; And because of all that, I can endure this life. ______________________ September 6, 2015 Verse For the contest, Where Do You Think You Will Spend Eternity, Sponsor, Laura Leiser Fourth Place

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Date: 9/16/2015 1:04:00 AM
Wonderful poem n win broken! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:41:00 PM
Broken Wings, your touching story was written with a heartfelt poignance that really drew me in! Thank you for entering my contest and congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:52:00 AM
So beautiful! :)
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:25:00 AM
Oh, forgot to select the 7 for your poem! Here it is. Sandra
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:08:00 AM
What a lovely and heartfelt declaration of faith. You will not be dissapointed.
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Date: 9/7/2015 8:10:00 AM
So beautifully written, BW. Your words support your faith in eternal life so well, and they echo my feelings also, as you can read in my entry, 'Stepping Stones.' I too have had those wonderful signs that support my belief. All the best in the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/6/2015 8:11:00 PM
BW, I enjoyed this well written testament of your faith. Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/6/2015 6:37:00 PM
Very true and touching. Enjoyed very much. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/6/2015 6:26:00 PM
Silent One said it all..simply beautiful
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