Eternity

The Symbolic ring Neither beginning nor end Everlasting love. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2012 11:19:00 AM

Oh Harry, your senryu is another compelling write. love is never ending when taking the symbol of the rings to heart... love this...pd

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2010 6:17:00 AM

Well, I had to go back a way to find one of your poems I hadn't read, Harry. How quickly you became one of my favorite poets here. This is exactly what the wedding ring is supposed to symbolize, but the vows seem to be taken too lightly today. Beautifully written senryu, my friend, and thank you for your comments today. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 5:59:00 PM

Good way to portray it, harry. bye now, Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/1/2010 4:32:00 AM

Love this one, Harry!! Well written Senryu! And thank you for commenting "Night Desire"! Have a nice Sunday and great week ahead!...Gert

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/31/2010 12:47:00 AM

great senryu harry, i love it when few words could say so much and the ring itself is such a simple symbol that holds so much meaning