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Eternal Promise

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The place delivers the promise. Time is set in a breath of solace. The result shows a split in this case. And a wink to the hunt for a chase. Evil smell, the door says. And the breeze in the hallway. This is what the prey tries to sway. We observed a genuine love die.
Written: July 31, 2022

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Date: 8/5/2022 8:24:00 PM
Your "Eternal Promise" is a creative write. Lovely picture. Have a great/blessed weekend................
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Date: 8/1/2022 8:34:00 AM
A great group of couplets which you encase within a soothing, sentimental write, well penned Lasaad and congratulations. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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