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Eternal Love

D-ream of your love when she is frail and old, A-nd know her love for you will never change, N-urture the gifts she brings and always hold, I-mmersed in life's love which is preordained, E-ach loving moment in riches soaked in gold, L-ove with eyes and voice that will not change. C-all nightingales to sing when love has flown, A-nd feed her spirit of songs of love and prose, P-lenished with a joy that she has always known, L-ove in dreams, with words and heart to show, I-mpress in sadness how your love has grown, N-ever forget the uniqueness of love, to let go.

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Date: 3/31/2024 4:17:00 PM
Your poem has a soft, dreamy quality to it that's mesmerizing. Such a pleasant read. I particularly liked the image you created in these lines: "Call nightingales to sing when love has flown, And feed her spirit of songs of love and prose," I agree....'never forget the uniqueness of love' Well done, Daniel. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 4/1/2024 7:07:00 AM
Hi Sara , I thought I would try and write an Acrostic poem using my name it was slightly more challenging than I thought but it's okay. As always thank you for your kind words . Daniel

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