Eternal Flames

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Ceaseless flames ignite Morning rose with gleaming light~ Passion takes its flight Drenched in pouring rain Love's path they dared to embrace~ Eyes locked, no goodbyes Whispers in the mist Love's scene seductively waltzed~ Lightning reveals ghost Electric Love shines Her touch ignites my desire~ Cupid's arrow strikes

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Jay Narain

Date: 9/7/2023 10:26:00 AM

Nice romantic haikus.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2023 10:14:00 AM

Dear Sotto, like I’ve always said my friend, you write pure and real gems worth reading over and over again, as they are soul warming and poetic. A haiku can be this romantic and soulful , is beyond me, i love a haiku that not only paints imagery but is evocative and yours do just that. Especially loved “ eyes locked no goodbyes” “ whispers in the mist(that whole haiku) “ her touch ignites my desires” how heartfelt and moving. Truly an impeccable as always . Rosy chain of haiku. Delightful