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Eternal Breath

Somehow, tiny beads of pearly dew Fall gently marking ended hours; My sighs meander, deep in prayers Where daylight peals along gardens wide, And fibers of orchids knot an embrace Till afterlife’s veil brushes my face. Eternal Breath Contest of Gail Doyle by nette onclaud

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/30/2013 8:21:00 AM

Your poems always carry a sense of dreamy ethereal beauty that floats the reader along. I always sigh for I reach the end too soon. Congrats on your win.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/28/2013 5:13:00 AM

lovely dreamy write Nette congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/27/2013 2:53:00 PM

Dreamy nette, could you give me one for Mother's Night? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Robert Davidson

Date: 11/27/2013 6:49:00 AM

another great write congratulations. Robert

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/27/2013 3:54:00 AM

many congrats nette love xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2013 9:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win, nette

Joseph May

Date: 11/26/2013 8:42:00 PM

congrats on your win Nette...beautiful write

Donna Jones

Date: 11/26/2013 7:36:00 PM

Nette...I really think you have conversations with angels....or could....your words fit together so beautifully I'm afraid to breathe...:-)

Donna Jones
Date: 11/26/2013 7:37:00 PM

And congratulations.... :-)

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/26/2013 5:25:00 PM

Great win nette.Congratulations. (: ) PU.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 5:15:00 PM

Nice win Nette....PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2013 2:32:00 PM

- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/6/2013 1:15:00 AM

great poem nette.(: ) Jenish.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/4/2013 3:20:00 PM

A beautiful, beautiful poem! Very touching and endearing. Excellent writing, Nette! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the encouraging comments. I truly appreciate it! :)

Len Gasun

Date: 11/2/2013 6:25:00 AM

Hi, my dear friend! I was on my way back to your page when I've clicked my inbox. This is a splendid write. Hand salute again! Yes, Thanks God, I'm finally in Bkk now. Thank you so much for the condolences my dearest friend. I will do my best to go home on Dec. so I can meet my uncle. I'll keep in touch always ok. Thanks a lot for everything. About my contest, napuno na ba?? 'Cuz not ready to judge yet lol. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/2/2013 2:14:00 AM

Etheric verse for enchanted hearts and enraptured souls under the watchful eye of the vault of heavens!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 11:20:00 PM

this is gorgeous, and the ending is so romantic. I am curious why you bolded certain letters. Is it symbolic? soupmail for ya

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/1/2013 4:44:00 PM

Heart touching poem, my beautiful friend. Romantic fragrance is there too. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/1/2013 8:10:00 AM

If such is the surrounding, I will be inspired to write poem after poem, nette

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/31/2013 9:10:00 PM

This is a perfect majestic write that you have written here today my friend! I am enamored by the splendorous words your have displayed here, "vaults of stars linger", "tiny beads of pearly dew" all of which are tremendous and awe inspiring! I really enjoyed reading this dynamic poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/31/2013 5:28:00 PM

So so very beautiful dear nettie.I do love the vaults of stars in your pristine verses.Tnks for stopping by dear.Hope you are fine.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/31/2013 4:05:00 PM

Hi Nette, Some good stuff here.. Ken

Daniel Port

Date: 10/31/2013 1:37:00 PM

Makes me ponder about mortality and eternity. You surely led the way by alluding to stars and flowers.Sure sign of an illustrious poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2013 12:43:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..It has a sad tone but a passionate tone that says your love for someone goes on and on..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2013 12:40:00 PM

- Oh, so touching beautiful .... (If you were a flower .... I'd picked you my friend!) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)