Etched

Etched in flowers

Etched in pain

Filled with sorrow

These leaves of strain

Winds crisp snap brings chills to spine

To hear the call of my loves devine

Breathing aches

This hallowed feeling

Kill each spirit

My inner deamonds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 25, 2016 at 11:03 PM
burnadette hiveley, enjoyed reading your poem AGAIN, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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May 5, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Burnadette, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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May 5, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Nicely written, welcome to the soup. Looking forward to more of your imagery.DMB
A  Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Well done.... Skat
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