Essence

"Come let me love you" Like when we were younger Ahh!! The scent of Wild Honeysuckle The kiss of a delicate rose .... Purest of mountain streams So refreshing of our young love to dream As the beauty and touch of Tube Roses Our love transposes into reality Drawn to you my lover with just a whisper A call of your name_The essence of strength The zephry of early spring "You fill up my senses_Come fill me again" Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Synesthesia:Inner Body Movement Quotes from John Denver's song "Annie's Song" The senses are sight, scent, touch

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 8:47:00 PM

Sara, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/14/2012 8:38:00 AM

I felt the fresh spirit in here, this poem is really uplifting Sara, love it! and good luck for your contest

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/13/2012 9:43:00 PM

Sara; this is really good. So elegant written.I'm sure that you will win. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 12/12/2012 11:14:00 PM

Profound and beautiful, as always.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/12/2012 10:26:00 PM

Sara, you will do good in the contest.. i have to look up Nette's contest... wishing you the best...pd

Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2012 9:00:00 PM

An excellent entry for the contest my dear Sara. I love it so much! You nailed the theme! A supper winning piece for me! Good luck always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Rollo West

Date: 12/12/2012 5:33:00 PM

Hi Sara, what a great write this is and enjoyed reading it. Rollo

Jack Horne

Date: 12/12/2012 3:11:00 PM

love this clever write, Sara - I just can't think of anything for this contest

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/12/2012 1:10:00 PM

so true the line "you fill up my senses" it fits the poem perfectly. like when we were younger our youth is going away. perhaps to a woman a kiss is like a rose. we men we like kisses so you can keep the rose.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/12/2012 10:41:00 AM

Forever love, on life's journey ..... - This is just so gorgeous written Sara. - Would like your poem to get the first place in the contest!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/12/2012 9:38:00 AM

This is such a beautiful write my friend! I truly love each and every line of this tender poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this incredible piece here this morning! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2012 9:16:00 AM

Sara very smooth write, I like and good luck...David

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/12/2012 9:05:00 AM

Oooo...This is soooo lovely!!! A very interesting contest Nette has sponsored. Good luck with this one!! :)