Escape

Mouse Small, gray Running, hopping, surviving Field, grass, weeds, freedom Racing, slithering, striking Smooth, sneaky Snake 6/9/19 Placed 3rd in the Sparkling Diamonds Contest.

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/26/2019 12:50:00 PM

I hope he got away! Very fun poem. Congrats on your win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thanks! Yes , he got away :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 9:28:00 PM

Nicely done Heidi, Congrats on your win..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/14/2019 3:28:00 AM

Ouch. Good stuff. Kind wishes, Kai

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2019 5:58:00 AM

Thank you Kai :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/10/2019 7:50:00 AM

Well written Heidi, hope all's well. Tom. P.S. Good luck.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Tom :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/10/2019 7:48:00 AM

You nailed it..succinctly descriptive..mouse, small, gray...snake, smooth, sneaky..well done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay :)