Escapades

You being with me, escapades wild and crazy. Silliness and laughter remembered after. You, so mischievous fun and frivolous. Dreamed of deliciousness, bewitching blissfulness. You being with me, escapades wild and crazy. Sexy and sensual , spine-tingling festival. Your dangerous grin, angel eyes, devilish within. Captivating, charming dashingly disarming. You being with me, escapades wild and crazy. Champagne effervescence your soul's luminescence. Like tapestry design our threads intertwine. Lively and sublime you, my once in a lifetime. Susan Ashley July 23, 2017

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/14/2019 11:19:00 PM

superbly rhythmic it's

Susan Ashley
Date: 4/5/2019 6:37:00 PM

Mahtab, it makes me so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind visit and your uplifting comment. Much appreciation for your thoughts! Warmest wishes and please accept my apologies for my late reply.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/21/2017 7:29:00 PM

So much innocence in your writing, amid all the words." Spine-tingling festival." Made me smile...It's amazing we get older but the child remains...even though covered with experiences...Enjoyed this one...I do wish you all the best in the world... A big big hug

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/21/2017 7:35:00 PM

My wonderful friend Arturo, I relish your beautiful comments and your heartfelt sentiments made me smile.. It's so true what you say about how 'we get older but the child remains' (thank God for that, lol), I guess that's what's meant by 'young at heart'. I never want to grow up 'completely' and I feel you are the same way too. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this write. My warmest wishes to you and big hugs and smiles ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/12/2017 7:36:00 AM

This sounds to me like a first love that has matured from the initial mutual carefree attraction into a lasting one, Susan. Lovely lyrics...all you need is a composer, now:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/12/2017 6:09:00 PM

Paul, I love your beautiful interpretation of my poem. I'm happy you enjoyed this write. A composer would be nice I suppose, I would not be opposed to hearing this poem set to a lovely musical score :)) My warmest wishes ~Susan

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/15/2017 11:32:00 AM

Wow what beautiful heartfelt descriptions. Your rhyming flows through easily. Excellently penned. You are a delight to read. Thank you for sharibg.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/15/2017 6:02:00 PM

Suzanne, it makes me so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind visit and your uplifting and warmhearted comment. Much appreciation for your thoughts! ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/24/2017 4:21:00 AM

Very well penned and worded, Susan. Escapism is an interesting concept. Gives a sense of freedom.

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/24/2017 6:41:00 PM

Hi Subimal, thank you for reading my poem and for your kind encouragement :)