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Erratic 5 - a Sunset

The dimly lit sky is everywhere. An ocean of precious peach and cooling citrus, Bright yellow splashes of cheesy happiness, And a sparkling red jewel embedded in its drapes. The avalanche of red warmth lavishly submerges the scenery into its onsen perfection. Sweetness like red bean, and a tart tang of sour apple. Gently awaiting the moon... for the wick to blow for the ink to dry And the false sun to leave. A branch droops. A leaf falls.

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Date: 1/11/2018 4:41:00 AM
Full of imagery and color..."A branch droops. A leaf falls." All the best Once Shore
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