Erotic Wink

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Written: September 23, 2023 No 1243 New Poem Only Sponsored by: Brian Strand A Quintain CArPe DIeM _____________________________________________________________ I've been looking for a lover day after day, Some are fresh, others are of stellar sway Horses may be led to river yet not told to drink, Do not apply if the fresh mare erotically wink, Alas, she will have him sip or just sink in a blink

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/27/2023 8:04:00 PM

Whoa Nelly! What a grand poem with much secondary meaning beyond just a drink at the river. There's a bit of horsing around here. The best poem I've read all day. Loved it! Be well. Brian

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/26/2023 2:12:00 AM

Nice, congratulations, Sotto:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2023 10:19:00 AM

- Well done ... smile :) - Congratulations on your win, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/25/2023 6:42:00 AM

Brilliant wordplay my dear friend! So much depth in your lines as always and the flow is seamless and captivating! I think many would appreciate this poem written in sheer eloquence! Congratulations! Im so happy to see you win.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2023 4:32:00 AM

A funny write my friend clever and full of short messages and meaning. You gave me the giggles Lesaad. hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/23/2023 9:46:00 PM

Loved this one, made me smile, big time!

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 12:44:00 PM

Haha this is fun a enticing. Love.