Erosion - 1 and 2

Erosion - 1

With a scholar eye I am looking at-

Looking at Sharpened Dream,
Burning heart burning across
Feeling the sour, feeling the layer

Is being wet tongue, gradually uncovered
vibrating lips and stick while mixing at liquor

-	A chemical compound searching for eyes
-	Searching liberty from sin
-	Burning the recipe of purity

I am chewing all the glamour with tortured eyes
Breathing fragrance; 

breathing easily passing days and nights
Easily

being tortured, told her- 
As its an erosion ; it’s a feelings


Written by Javed Akter

Erosion – 2

Sharp Sunshine ; I become anxious
sharpened me while it touches 
the ground

Like homeless lives I search forever
Blue ; blue feelings always
Walking around

Always sliding doors are crawling 
Crawling ever now and then

Kindly me; myself kind while waking up
After long night sleepless; sleeveless 
From deadly bed

Changing everything; changing backbone slowly
Steadily this side and that
Every time looking at decay

-Decay altering the sides

my feelings ; herself towards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 5, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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January 4, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Javed. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2009 at 11:55 PM
THANKS ALL MY FRIEND AND FAN FOR YOUR KIND SUPPORT.
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September 26, 2009 at 10:37 AM
Javed, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 11:12 PM
Congrates on your wonderful poems going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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September 25, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 5:10 PM
Dear javed, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Javed, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Javed.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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