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Erosion

Ghostly grey in death. Lifeless arms and leafless. Drowned by times erosion. Change forced by the grief-less. You were here before me; a timeless guard and river guide … once you steered the course, standing proudly river side. Still, you’re home to many travellers, for 'tis the water they must follow. Now a stark island wayward stop or a haven with a hollow. Stand your ground, oh Red Gum, against the tide which caused your dearth, where generation after generation, preceded you to mother earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/26/2020 1:21:00 PM
You truly have a very vivid imagination Lindsay - this is a sad poem about the tree that saw its fall and drowned by times erosion. A Brilliant poem Lindsay. Blessings, All stay well. Jennifer.
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:58:00 PM
Thank you once again Jennifer. You always write a positive comment and for any writer that is very uplifting indeed - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 3/26/2020 12:57:00 AM
Beautifully written and well expressed with wonderful imagery and great emotion. Loved it. God Bless, JB Just out of hospital again. Am doing okay. Sorry I am so often away
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:51:00 PM
Hello Judy … thank you for commenting Judy. Sorry to read that you have been in hospital. Pleased that you're okay again - Lindsay
Date: 3/25/2020 9:10:00 PM
Lovely write, Lindsay, beautifully described, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:48:00 PM
G'day Viv … thank you for your kind comment Viv. It's good to be reading your new posts also - stay safe Viv - Lindsay
Date: 3/23/2020 9:29:00 PM
Trees are the record keepers of earth with their rings. It is sad to see one felled by a flood. You give this tree emotions through your words and it is beautiful Lindsay! Thank you. Keep well. xxoo
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:46:00 PM
Hello Connie … I've seen occurrences like this many times Connie. Erosion occurs and exposes the root system of these fine old eucalypts until they can hold on no more and collapse into the river - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Date: 3/20/2020 11:28:00 PM
Natures evolution, so unique your poetry, Lindsay. Stay safe.
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:42:00 PM
Oh thank you harry … Mother Nature will not allow a vacuum. She will find something to fill it - you stay safe too harry in these harrowing times - Lindsay
Date: 3/18/2020 7:18:00 PM
The sad truth, so well-penned. Kudos, L.L. :) gw
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Gershon … the earth is forever changing even when humanity isn't present. Thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 3/17/2020 10:51:00 PM
There is an ancient cottonwood in a remote section of Arizona's White River slowly slipping into the river. Although bald eagles still perch in its branches, its future is as dreary as life under Trump! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:37:00 PM
G'day Rico … the world of humanity is under pressure at this time, and its future looks dim if these viruses continue to escalate to dangerous levels, so the erosion of species could occur - thank you Rico - Lindsay
Date: 3/17/2020 10:41:00 PM
I saw a time lapse of a village on the coast of England. It completely fell into the sea over a forty year period. Church, graveyard and all. Kind of spooky. Erosion is a serious thing. Wonderful poem. Have a great day.
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:32:00 PM
Hello David … at this time with global warming and ice caps melting, the oceans are rising and claiming the shorelines - thank you David - Lindsay
Date: 3/17/2020 10:00:00 PM
The forever changing landscape, it's often said mother earth is a living thing. Tom
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Date: 3/26/2020 7:29:00 PM
Hello Tom … I agree. The earth never stands still, but it takes its time - thanks Tom - Lindsay

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