Ere the Grassy Knoll Gathers Momentum

Early on, ere the grassy knoll gathers momentum
  huddled shivering against the ground, stemless tops 
of yellow dot the lawns of the old neighborhood, signaling
  winter's demise without shouting Spring too loudly...

In a wink or a blink of an eye, these wild buttons 
  mushroom, spreading far and wide, usurping
the green mantle of my lawn, stems now shooting forth
  twisting and turning at jagged angles, bizarrely... 

at times, wild undergrowth barging into a (civilized) urban plot
  when poof! their signature yellow smiles vanish, dispersed into
puff balls, architectural marvels, wind-scattered seeds, ubiquitous
  but not before my inner child picks out a lovely bouquet
    for my saintly mother  


          April 07, 2019
   Entry in DANDELIONS contest
       Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/22/2019 3:43:00 PM
Congrats, Wolf. It was great.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2019 4:09:00 PM
Even greater, I hope, is my appreciation for your support and encouragement, my dear friend! Thank you so much! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/18/2019 9:50:00 PM
Lovely, Gershon. Reminds me of all the times I picked dandelion bouquets for my mother. I especially like your phrase 'signaling winter's demise without shouting Spring too loudly'. Definitely an innocuous weed that creeps onto the scene and is suddenly everywhere. Great descriptions. Hugs.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/19/2019 6:16:00 PM
Janece, if memory serves me correctly, your poem was on top of the winner's list. Very nice of you to look down from 'your perch on high' up there to view a lowly paean like me digging and scratching to maintain his place on the mountainside somewhere. LOL (twice)! Seriously, thank you so much for the view and the viewpoint! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/18/2019 10:52:00 AM
Poof! LOve your piece, the ending just lovely. Congrats. BG
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2019 12:23:00 PM
Aw, shucks! I'm such a sap for sentimentality sometimes... Thank you for the feedback on this one, Barbara. Best always, Gershon
Date: 4/17/2019 11:25:00 PM
My son was four when he picked me a bunch and gave them to me. I cherished them, of course. Your poem is beautiful Gershon. Congratulations on your deserving win! : ) xxoo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2019 12:22:00 PM
Connie, I hope you've removed the yellow tint from your face by now!!!! LOL. Thank you so much for the little anecdote and for the appreciation. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/17/2019 12:11:00 PM
Lovely write my friend...DANDELIONS will never be the same lol...Congrats! on the fine win...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2019 3:35:00 PM
---as long as dandelions will never be different!! LOL. Thanks for the feedback on this one! ~ gw
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