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Erasing Her

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Her memory is a breath of laughter Caressing the night in layers of starlight Dreams rising on the greenest pastures Where sun and moon glimmer, winking While gently comforting, shining O’er a reflection of yesterday When she knew life – before old age Her memory erases the many years Of silence where her photo delights In grinning from edges of a dull frame, eyes twinkling love beneath warm lashes lining emerald legends Promises of kindness reminding that she was once young Her heart has broken and been mended by time and God Who knows her as she is inside - young there in her spirit Where she shines proficiency Experience slides across her cheeks Dimming her eyes with silent tears Her Spirit survives and thrives - With love that is alive inside Where she tries to deny that time Is slowly erasing her sparkle - still, she shines! Poetry as Legacy Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier March 6, 2021

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Date: 4/4/2021 3:12:00 PM
What a beautiful poem with many evocative lines. Could have been a first place poem. It is to me, I love it! God bless you. Bryan.
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