Erasing Bad Mistakes

Have you ever wished you could erase a bad mistake from your past?
Something that you wish you could forget and move from really fast?
Nothing they have speak of or says lingers with any type of grace,
Yet you are stuck hearing it and it screaming in your face.

Typically their words surround nothing but cheating or lust,
Or eyes bulging forward at anything with an **** or bust,
When can we shut these people out of our decent world we want,
Instead they hover like some sort of scary spook and haunt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/17/2011 5:59:00 PM
sounds good...researching here some sites
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:56:00 AM
I am glad to hear you are supporting somehow who is having a rough time. I, too, helped my best friend who's husband left her for another woman. I found that the best way to offer support was to refocus attention to her future, not her past. We talked about things like hope, love, letting go... You may want to consider writing poems of hope, new love, new life, friendship, mended hearts to help her towards a healthier way of thinking and getting her to move forward and let go. Love ya!
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:39:00 AM
i am offering an x wife who is suicidal support cyndi who has been cheated on, through emails...
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:38:00 AM
i draw on me but I also draw on mankind cyndi..
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Date: 5/17/2011 7:34:00 AM
no I am not poking at anyone cyndi? it is called supportive not poking?
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:45:00 AM
I'm also a bit confused as to why you are writing from other people's points of view. You certainly have a BIG well of life experiences to draw from, and I think if you delve into that, concentrate on that, then just maybe you will get what you want and get published. And if someone is suicidal, my choice wouldn't be to poke at her and her choices--it is all far too sad and those who are emotionally devasted deserve some time to recover and kindness. I'd like to visit again soon-lets make plans.
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:44:00 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your poetry this morning M.M. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:37:00 AM
Hi- Good Morning. What a wet week. I need to pick up one of those plastic covers for the stroller today. The one I have doesn't fit and my girl gets wet. Hey hon, I'd prefer that you don't deal with this stuff on my postings, okay? So far, I have been treated fairly by everyone here at P.S. I won't be getting involved in other people's private lives, as it doesn't concern me. Other people have a right to make their own mistakes, my view, and I won't be giving my two cents.
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:24:00 AM
i remember rob stalking you at the daycare center..jeff used to a few things like that...he would hit redial on the phone after i used it, dig through my purse...ask friends if I really went to visit them..etc..
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:21:00 AM
his x wife knows he is behind certain accounts here cyndi, and i send her links..and she knows it is him..so dont believe the cheating postings he puts up does not make a woman cry..it does..and she learned nothing from his mistakes..i should have sent this to you via email, i am going to send you the full story via email..
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:20:00 AM
he was lurking in my forum under a fake account, delivered by the prophecies God told me, then he dropped his x wifes name. and voila, I hunted her down online, found her..and sure enough the whole story was laid out for me to know..so dont believe that the adultery postings cyndi does not affect anyone..his x wife reads them here too..
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:18:00 AM
do you think she has become wiser cyndi from his affairs and moving 500 miles away? this is why I do not disregard some postings..not everyone becomes wiser after finding out their husband had about 3 or more affairs and moves that distance away..she is very scarred..appreciates my emails too..very much so :)
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:15:00 AM
anyways cyndi, this man was lurking in my forum, and I tracked down his x wife to discover his story..so dont believe that everyone learns from mistakes while she is 500 miles away and suicidal..reading both my sites and speaking to me via email
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:14:00 AM
a woman I speak to through email cyndi is suicidal and has been left by a man from this site who had many affairs..he lives in new zealand..he moved 500 miles away from his family...and now she is running around alone with 3 kids while he sees them maybe once a month..he moved to the second island..so not everyone learns from mistakes..she tried to commit suicide when he served her divorce papers
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:12:00 AM
not really cyndi, i am speaking to a woman whos husband here had many affairs on her..through email, she is suicidal and does not believe his mistakes taught her anything really
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:11:00 AM
you mean rob...well Jeff used to throw me around a bit..the same jeff from kitchener..tried to choke me one night..unfaithful prick too
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:47:00 PM
Actually, this one made me shiver. I once had a bad relationship turn into a bad break up- and he actually stalked me. I mean that I would show up at work where I had to spend time outside and he was there, leaning against a tree, just watching me all the time. He followed me and once put his hands around my neck and told me that I shouldn't live without him. That being said, I think that mistakes make us who we are. Maybe instead of erasing them we could embrace them :-) We become stronger,wise
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:31:00 PM
Hello Mist, I enjoyed your poem Erasing Bad Mistakes ... it made me laugh... good sense of humour. Warm Regards Venetia
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:32:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. Really enjoyed the read
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:35:00 PM
nice poem, i liked it, thank you.
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