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Erase the Tempest?

Ink quills and vellum
     Sensitivities on rags
           The bard's monument







For Mr. Brian Stand's contest:
Poetry of the Noun

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Sara Lokken

January 31, 2010 at 8:07 AM

I am so glad you're still writing. This is amazing. Hugs*

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM

This is just clever, John :) The bard would be touched :) Congrats on your win :)

Constance La France

January 27, 2010 at 5:59 PM

Enjoy the glory..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

January 26, 2010 at 5:17 AM

Dear John, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's "Noun Haiku" Contest Superb Pen Always...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

January 26, 2010 at 4:27 AM

Brilliant wrting, John. Please be assured that we are all praying for your speedy recovery. You have been on my mind since I read the blog posted by your mother. You are one of my favorite "bards." Love and best wishes, Carolyn

Elaine George

January 26, 2010 at 3:47 AM

Folklore and legends that have stood the test of time. Sensational Haiku of nouns, John. Congratulations on your win. I hope you will keep us up-dated on your own journey via blog here at the soup. Love, lainie

Audrey Haick

January 25, 2010 at 10:06 PM

Great job! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Poetry of the Noun" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Robert A. Dufresne

January 25, 2010 at 5:50 AM

Another great one by you , John. Wonderful. Congratulations! -Robert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 25, 2010 at 2:37 AM

Congratulations John, on placing in Brian’s Poetry of the Noun Haiku contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Margaret Foster

January 25, 2010 at 12:54 AM

Hi John, I see the writer at his old fashioned desk. good work...Margaret

Linda Witt-King

January 24, 2010 at 3:21 PM

Really good John. Great image. Congratulations! Linda

John Freeman

January 23, 2010 at 4:51 PM

Congratulations on your mention John. Sincerely, Moses

John Freeman

January 23, 2010 at 4:51 PM

Congratulations on your mention John. Sincerely, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2010 at 1:55 PM

well, what the heck, Heck! I never even saw this one yet. It's really good. Congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

January 23, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Oh I like this and I see it won high honors. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

January 23, 2010 at 11:15 AM

I was blown away by this amazing haiku, ....not the least surprised to see it among the winning poems! Congrats, John....so well deserved! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 23, 2010 at 11:10 AM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Brian's Poetry of the Noun contest.. wonderful words to your entry and well deserved win.. great blogs from u also .. enjoy both ... luv.. Linda-Marie..