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Equilibrium Senryu

equilibrium ease, eating exigency ebbs of ecstasy I0/16/2022

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Elena Eagle

Date: 10/19/2022 11:21:00 AM

This was fun to read. Keep it up.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2022 4:07:00 PM

Ok, Elena!will try… you commented twice! I love it. Big thanks Huggs, Pamgie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2022 9:06:00 PM

Easy to marvel at, hard to maintain. My equilibrium is undone by my overactive brain... Tra-la, gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2022 6:23:00 AM

Well, an overactive brain can wreck havoc on the joy Of the moment. I experience that also…I have to Telll my brain” thank you for sharing” and move on! Otherwise, I become a slave to it. That is no fun and it’s meaningless! And then? Unable to live in the nonent! Arg! Huggs, Pangie

Robert Gorelick

Date: 10/18/2022 6:40:00 PM

Ecstacy can't always be flowing, must ebb from time to time, as they say...'Into every life a little rain must fall". Keep the course! Robert

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2022 6:18:00 AM

Howdy, Robert. Oh, I love ecstasy! Meaning when I throw myself 100 per cent into any task. Rain? Let it rain on me, as long as I keep sizzling! Hope you understand what I men))) Huggs, Pangie

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/17/2022 11:00:00 PM

Indeed there is an equilibrium.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2022 12:56:00 AM

Good Day! I am so glad you see the equilibriums. Pashang! Thank you, dear poet! Huggs, Pangie

John Watt

Date: 10/17/2022 12:17:00 PM

Love that word, equilibrium! Says so much. Senryu writing is all about using those TNT words that explode off the page full of meaning and emotion. For me, life is all about balance - equilibrium of mind, soul, spirit, and body; making sure each one is stimulated and rested in proper sustainable balance. Exigency is another wonderful $100 word. Your poem gets an 'E' for erudite and effulgent! Blessings, my friend ~ John

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2022 3:56:00 PM

Amazing, I got two E’s in one day…from you, the other from Joe! Without balance, stress occurs. I know that path all too well! You mentioned, “soul”. That is the heart of the matter. A soul not at ease, cannot experience peace. Peace does not originate in the UN nor in getting our heads afloat in the madness of national or international affairs. It exists in our relationship to our God. Your vocabulary, John, is superb plus…as is your veracity and friendship! Huggs, Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 10/17/2022 11:53:00 AM

Another masterpiece from you very prolific quill, Pangie! Bob H

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2022 3:38:00 PM

Hello, Bob! Golly, had no idea this was a masterpiece! I am sure others think the opposite! That’s OK, though. Still smiling that you got the POTD. Wunderbar! Huggs, Pangie

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/17/2022 10:05:00 AM

Excellent! Another "E" for you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2022 3:34:00 PM

Ok. Prince! I do happily accept and “E”! What an ingenious comment from the DeMino Palace of Fine Arts! Huggs, Pangie

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/17/2022 9:14:00 AM

Most are distracted by these things of pettiness; some know how to live with balance and know how to enjoy all the gifts offered us. The e's have it! You are a deep soul, Pangie. Hugs ~Anaya

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2022 9:34:00 AM

Greetings Ayana! Your words are so true! Living in peace and not disquietude impacts everyone. You summary is charming! The e’s have it. Indeed! Huggs, Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 10/17/2022 7:37:00 AM

A piece that is very creative. Well done again.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2022 9:30:00 AM

Happy Monday, Elena..hope you are recovering from your injury that was a week ago! God bless! Thank you for your time! Huggs, Pangie!

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/16/2022 6:08:00 PM

Wow!! Such big truth packed in such a small punch!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/16/2022 7:45:00 PM

Dear Becky, I assume you are a loving and deep soul, to catch the philosophy behind this! Congratulations!! Most will see it as a “ nothing- burger!” Hardly -)). Length of a poem, and fancy frills mean nothing…at least to me! No heart in it? Then, not a poem. Simple! Thank you! Pangie