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The party was great. Wine flowed freely. I was proud for my award, A professor of Literature, Even though I was young, Tall and handsome, an attraction to most. Suddenly Rita, a friend, grabbed me by my arm, And smiling said: “Isn’t mathematical disciplines Great tools for differential equations.” I stared at her, thinking of insanity. Who cares for mathematical equations? But she insisted that differential geometry And those of topology were important. “Sweetheart,” I retorted. “John Donne would do better.” She did not think so, as she grabbed me by my arm And led me to the samples of fine wine. “A pseudo holo morphic curve is so smooth, I’m sure you’ll agree.” My nerves were now frayed. I led her out into the garden towards the gazebo And gave her my best sample of a French kiss. She did not desist. It was fun. Perhaps there was something worthwhile Thinking on geometric equations.

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Date: 12/31/2021 8:00:00 PM
A sudden act of romance at an unexpected moment, quelling the frayed nerves of both. Sometimes a kiss has such magic. Beautifully expressed Victor !
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Date: 8/29/2021 11:03:00 AM
Lovely write :)
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Date: 8/29/2021 8:59:00 AM
Great equations Victor, ending with a french kiss, what bliss… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 8/28/2021 1:14:00 AM
That's great romance, Victor, equations or not, they sure shared sizzling chemistry:)
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Date: 8/26/2021 7:11:00 PM
Beautiful romantic story Victor. Enjoyed reading...Is it for a contest? ... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/26/2021 9:32:00 PM
No, sorry.
Date: 8/26/2021 11:21:00 AM
Hi Victor, I enjoyed the romantic dialogue and banter between the two characters. Well done. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/26/2021 11:20:00 AM
I love the outcome of this romantic caper. Nicely penned, Victor. :)
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Date: 8/26/2021 10:09:00 AM
- A wonderful romantic poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2021 6:28:00 AM
Lovely Poem, Victor, regardless of whether it's in the form of math, literature, or anything else, love is always something wonderful to experience. I ended up with a smile on my face after reading your poetry. Thanks for the smile, my dear friend.
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Date: 8/26/2021 6:01:00 AM
Love comes in many forms--mathematics, literature, it really doesn't matter. Your poem left me with a smile, Victor.
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Date: 8/26/2021 3:54:00 AM
So cute! Love talk between professors! xx
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Date: 8/26/2021 1:59:00 AM
Not the time to be thinking of equations lol. Im with Delice. Tom
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Date: 8/26/2021 1:17:00 AM
You have set me thinking of John Donne and his Flea. Think I prefer a French kiss in a gazebo lol...Delice
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