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Equation of Love's Probabilities

Our world is aligned with deep fervor, time, and shared geography: a constant value of random variables where beneath moonglow, he and I relish soft cuddles along evening’s byway, as we awaken to heightened energy… the pull from dotted stars and clouds grows buoyant, eclipsing the limits of a skyscape when dreams and laughter rise like towers…I breathe his wonder, radiating in glorious flow while dragonflies swerve; unable to decode our language whispered ever gently… At times, we fumble over trite errors, still, we connect through waves of affection’s frequency which expand into countless probabilities: that no matter how I spread the width and breadth borne from reasoning, the way quantum physics tries to explain life's equation, its exact tangent; the more intangible this soul behaves… for love is an undefined divine worth much like the mystery of a spirit song. Contest of John Hamilton: submitted 2/5/2017 Your best free verse love poem -------------------- Originally written 3/09/2016

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Date: 2/8/2017 11:36:00 AM
What a spectacular write Nette! 28/30 worthy of stand alone 3rd place!
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:10:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome "Equations win." LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 5:17:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/13/2016 1:55:00 PM
I am absolutely convinced that one day soon we will have constructed the first machine brain that is capable of artificial intelligence; and from there, well...Who knows? But will this super-fast evolving species ever be capable of sensing the unexplainable sensations experienced when trying to convey deep feeling of inter-connectedness when trying to express the impalpable...I wonder...I really do wonder? My very best regards, Nette...my very good friend! :) john
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Date: 3/11/2016 12:28:00 AM
Attempting to decode the intangibles under a microscope ... quite laughable, I say! You expressed yourself so eloquently in a poem that's a take on equations ... sure to do well.
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Date: 3/9/2016 10:07:00 PM
Nette, very nice, beautifully penned, love where you went with the theme, a true winner to me, 7 ~
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Date: 3/9/2016 5:41:00 PM
Excellent, Nette, you made love an equation good luck in the contest. 7 :)
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Date: 3/9/2016 1:25:00 PM
It is difficult to make equations into romance but you have done it well, nette. Quantum physics is exacerbating to say the least but you have figured out a way to make it seem romantic. Peace dear lady:) I like your version better!
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Date: 3/9/2016 8:41:00 AM
Even logarithms cannot figure out the nuances of love. You turned the topic around with creative flair!
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Date: 3/9/2016 7:44:00 AM
I like your kind of math Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/9/2016 7:34:00 AM
A constant, delicately woven, immeasurable bliss. How beautiful.
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:39:00 AM
Phenomenal! Love and it's depth defy any statistical data. Faving this one!
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:07:00 AM
- Beautiful and soft feelings in your poem today Nette - Luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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