Epitome of Love and Romance-Win

Shahjahan built the Taj Mahal, a mausoleum
Situated on the bank of the River Yamuna,
In memory of his beloved wife Mumtaz
With whom he fell in love at first sight
Espying her in a fair, enraptured by her charms.

 The very sight of The Taj leaves one mesmerized.
The voluptuous curves of domes and arches,
The rhythm of birds in flight, secrets of flowers,
Vibrant colors of Nature never fading,
Like the everlasting love of Shah Jahan,
Immortalizing it as the epitome of undying love,
A lyric carved in luminous marble,
This monument of immeasurable beauty.

The Taj Mahal, one of the Seven Wonders of the World,
The crown palace, of love and romance derives its name
From Shah Jahan and Mumtaz Mahal, the immortal lovers.
It’s promise kept to the dying wife in of a child birth.


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Shah Jahan was the emperor of India in 17th Century and Mumtaz Mahal was his third wife.
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Second Placement
Contest: Everyman's Ekphrasis by Brian Strand
The word Taj means crown and Mahal means palace-  The Taj Mahal is situated in Agra City of Uttar Pradesh state of India. Year of Construction: 1631-1653
Spread Over: 42 acres.

Yamuna: name of the river
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:35 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram..a hx lesson for me. BG
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April 21, 2010 at 11:31 PM
Very eloquent, glad to see you won Congtats
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April 21, 2010 at 6:56 PM
You paint a picture with words in this one. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your big honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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April 21, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Dr. Mehta - One of my dreams has always been to visit this place...not surprised this eloquent write is a winner! I also like the way you weaved so much information and history within this poem! - Tim
Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Exceptional poem in dedication to a most wonderful structure. How i would love to have been around when they built these iconic gems. Many congratulations on your second place in Brian's wonderful contest >> James
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April 21, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram Mehta. The Taj Mahal is a magnificent monument and it symmbolizes the grandeur and the beauty of mysterious India. Your poem is an inspiration to us all. I would like to take the opportunity to thank your for your kind comments on my poetry. I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors. Smile and have a wonderful day. Warmest regards, Andrew.
Murphy Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 9:12 AM
very nice and congrats on your win faleshia
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April 20, 2010 at 7:45 PM
I can imagine that no picture does justice to that magnificent Taj Mahal. Lucky are those who visited it. Interesting story behind this impressive wonder. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Foster Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram. I have seen many pictures of this magnificent building how I would love to be able to visit, ah well... I can dream...Margaret
Freeman Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations Dr Ram on your poem's most worthy place, Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest! Thanks for this bit of history, Dr. Ram. Peace. Audrey
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:17 AM
I remember this wonderful poem, and knew it would do well ! Congratulations on your win in this contest...so well deserved !! Love, Carrie
Johnson Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:02 AM
My granddaugter is traveling in India now and just emailed home about the Taj Mahal. She was so excited and you have described it so well. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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April 20, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Brian's contest... a wonderful write and win for your portfolio ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 1:42 AM
Wonderful, Wonderful! You have expressed with eloquent taste the grandure and beauty of this magnificent palace and you are so deserving of this win Dr.Mehta. It is one of my fondest wishes to visit this lovely palace one day. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie
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April 18, 2010 at 9:50 AM
an enchanted write of one of the wonders of the world which I have only seen in pictures, I was overwhelmed with those I am sure if I would ever get to see it in person it would be amazing to say the least,,best of luck in the contest,,and thank you for reading my words and taking the time to leave yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
White Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 10:38 PM
A great story of romance and sadness. Good luck to you also
M Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Nice poem. I enjoyed reading the romantic story/meaning behind the Taj Mahal. My brother, his wife and kids were thrilled to see the Taj Mahal in person and they brought back photos. However, I'm sure the photos did not do justice of this wonder.
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Great educational write...I have seen pictures and it is a beautiful place...I am sure that in actual presence of it would be even more beautiful..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Byrne Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:22 PM
The Taj Mahal,on my to visit list!
Kopp Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Carol, Inspirational well thought out write. Today it was good to read this Good luck on this in the every mans contest.
Henderson Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on many of my poems. This poem is very good. I have always admired the Taj Mahal. My son's family had the privilege of seeing it and speaking to the Dali Lama. For some reason, now I feel closer to both. I hope you entered it into Brians contest. rgs Charles
Richards Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Yes....amazing wonder of the world, and so worthy of your poetic skill! This shoud do well in Brian's contest, and I wish you well! Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 12:06 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Ram.Rgds Brian * congrats on your recnt contest successes
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