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EPITAPH OF LOVE

Lost
for words,
writers' block-
everything
said ?

Lost
for love,
broken up-
my emotions
dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/20/2009 7:18:00 AM
Be careful, son, flowers grow from seeds not roots alone ... look what you produced with only the seed of what you think is dead. David is on the right track ... I am gonna run with tribute, Love.
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Date: 5/19/2009 9:14:00 AM
And out of that death you did this? Then T.S. Eliot was almost right ...May is the cruellest month of the year, inspring fresh poems out of dead thoughts. Love.
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Date: 5/15/2009 11:48:00 PM
I feel like that sometimes. You described it well.
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Date: 5/15/2009 7:15:00 PM
Wonderful! So little said but so much knowledge gained!
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:36:00 PM
Brain Wonderfully expressed in so few words that's what I like about you, you say so much with so few words! Love Laura :)
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Date: 5/15/2009 7:20:00 AM
This is wonderful and poignant with emotion....you speak with a true poet's heart! Loved this comparing poetry and love! Excellent work here!!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:07:00 AM
Yes, must agree with the others on the comparison. Second verse leaves me terribly sad. So well written! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/15/2009 4:37:00 AM
This is done well...you drew a nice comparison like kristin said between the events...good work.
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:58:00 AM
I love the comparason between writer's block and lost love. both, terrible, terrible, terrible. but not this poem, it's wonderful. :) love, Kristin
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:46:00 AM
So much emotion in this write, very touching and sad. I really like this one because it shares the depth of your soul and the gentility that lives within you. Great writing in perfect form as always. Thank you for your kind comments and taking time to read my writing. Many Smiles from Lolita
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