Eos - Call of the Dawn

On the seventh ray
Of the fourteenth sun
Death hath come twofold
Arose a Titan in this age
Amidst this nimbus looms darkness
Betwixt the ash and sage

Approach cyclical ritual
Dousing wings in feral flames
Latent gravidity does surmise
For upon my resurrection
Eos I shall rise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lee Sr. Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Brilliance shines your words as the Sun in the sky. Thank you for sharing this delightful write which encompasses the stars that shine so bright... a" fav" for me welcome to... the Soup James
Wells Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Such wonderful mythic power here! This is like a fragment of a larger story that I want to finish. Thank you.
Lindley Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Awesome poem ... Phoenix from the fire and ash rose melts into blazing heights above new birth, mystical life had chose power gained from unstoppable love. Love your fine poem.. A fav..
Stewart Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 5:25 PM
What a beautiful piece, I admire your choice of words and imagery!
Escamilla Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. :)
Vyas Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Nice lines
Escamilla Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Ajmal Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 2:29 PM
A very beautiful written poem, i really enjoyed reading it, welcome to poetry soup I really hope you should enjoy your visit here however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Escamilla Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you for your comment. I will be sure to check out your work. :)
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:19 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first beautiful poem, Andreanna :) - // Sun :)
Escamilla Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:35 PM
I'm new as well... Thank you so much. I appreciate you. :)
White Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Eos, like a bird rising from the ashes :) Beautifully written, compact, full of imagery, great choice of words. Welcome to PoetrySoup!
Escamilla Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Thank you for your comment. I truly appreciate your words and your warm welcome. Eos, is actually a Titan goddess of the dawn. This write was a challenge write about what city I am from. I am from Phoenix, Arizona. There are so many poems about the Phoenix I wanted to put a different twist on things. Thank you though for your kind words.
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