Eon Arc

I am you the splitting of two we shall eat our rage in small doses now you are me in the mirror there’s three three caskets covered in roses

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/11/2023 11:30:00 AM

Wow, I cartwheeled through this poem with wide eyes... Very powerful words that leave you mystified and full of questions

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/19/2023 5:51:00 PM

my gratitude

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/9/2023 3:04:00 PM

The Holy Trinity Power of 3 Good Me Evil Me Plain Me But in the end of the day All 3 make up 1 Me

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/19/2023 5:51:00 PM

;)

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/7/2023 12:35:00 AM

Excellent. Eon. Aeon. Sounds like a dysfunctional family to me. One of those longings for a crazy get together at Christmas with unplanned fireworks. And by the time you all do get successfully together, you're pushing up daisies. The father, the son and the holy ghost, be with you...

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/7/2023 7:54:00 PM

thank you for the reply -

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/6/2023 8:47:00 PM

“eat our rage in small doses” ~ beautifully and artistically put, Mat. Enjoyed this powerful write

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/7/2023 7:55:00 PM

my gratitude

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/5/2023 5:50:00 AM

You've made it so poignant with this heartfelt wordplay, quite intriguing as well! The depth conveyed here really takes one on an introspective and melancholic ride.. Hued with vulnerability.. Loved reading this, absolutely.. Wonderfully crafted.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/6/2023 7:51:00 AM

much appreciated

Paige Hind

Date: 11/4/2023 4:38:00 PM

Hmmm.... "eat our rage in small doses" very deep- and the way the poem rhymes; it's a lot said in a few lines.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:56:00 PM

thank you -

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/4/2023 2:25:00 PM

a powerful poem and I especially liked the last two lines. This poem seems sad to me...perhaps someone with a split personality? Anyway, I liked it. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:57:00 PM

enjoy yours as well - thank you

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 4:47:00 AM

“Three caskets covered in roses” that line stood out for me really! Absolutely stunning and deeply moving poem, in few words you’ve expressed so much! Pleasure always reading your work

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:57:00 PM

appreciate your thoughts as always -

Michelle Smith

Date: 11/3/2023 11:32:00 PM

don't quite understand it, but i can kinda see it, and i feel... sad

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:58:00 PM

thank you for the reply