Get Your Premium Membership

Envy

Her silent steps the night takes, ink-stained fingers sculpt erotica: she is the child of disillusionment. Crooked smile hears the words outside her head- within reach, but not quite. The mirrors in her room reflect the kohl of her achievements; she is a stream long run dry in desperation for agriculture. The cigarettes blister her lips in the careless moments of broken shards; she is the firefly caught in the summer storm, beckoning lights have shut the windows. Her world towers and reproves the thought of her in the charcoal street; she is a flower that blooms by the roads, feeds on the dust and craves to be steel. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Date: 06 / 11 / 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/29/2016 5:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tamal. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/30/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. I wish you well in you future endeavours.
Date: 12/24/2016 1:57:00 PM
wow, Tamal. This is the poetry Rob craves!! No wonder I do not often do too well in his contests. GREAT free verse. Wish I could write this way! Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/24/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I read through some of rob's works, he's a remarkable poet, just as you. :)
Date: 12/23/2016 1:54:00 PM
Wow, Tamal. Fireworks. Dense with pleasure is this, to read.
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/23/2016 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Doug. :)
Date: 12/23/2016 9:08:00 AM
Congrats Tamal! :-)
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/23/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 12/22/2016 9:43:00 PM
Wonderful poem and very thought provoking phrases. Congrats, Tamal.
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/22/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thanks, Afzal!
Date: 12/22/2016 8:32:00 PM
Let me first say what a tragedy it is that I am the first to comment on this poem. Thank you for gracing my contest with this poem.
Login to Reply
Kundu Avatar
Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/22/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you rob, and thank you for the contest!

Book: Shattered Sighs