Envy

Her silent steps the night takes,
ink-stained fingers sculpt erotica:
she is the child of disillusionment.
Crooked smile hears the words outside her head-
within reach, but not quite.

The mirrors in her room reflect
the kohl of her achievements;
she is a stream long run dry
in desperation for agriculture.

The cigarettes blister her lips
in the careless moments of broken shards;
she is the firefly caught in the summer storm,
beckoning lights have shut the windows.

Her world towers and reproves the thought
of her in the charcoal street;
she is a flower that blooms by the roads,
feeds on the dust
and craves to be steel.


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Date: 06 / 11 / 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Krampe Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Congrats on your win, Tamal. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Kundu Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Thank you, Agnes. I wish you well in you future endeavours.
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 1:57 PM
wow, Tamal. This is the poetry Rob craves!! No wonder I do not often do too well in his contests. GREAT free verse. Wish I could write this way! Congrats on your win.
Kundu Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I read through some of rob's works, he's a remarkable poet, just as you. :)
Vinson Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Wow, Tamal. Fireworks. Dense with pleasure is this, to read.
Kundu Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Doug. :)
Martin Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Congrats Tamal! :-)
Kundu Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Nusker Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Wonderful poem and very thought provoking phrases. Congrats, Tamal.
Kundu Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Thanks, Afzal!
Carmack Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Let me first say what a tragedy it is that I am the first to comment on this poem. Thank you for gracing my contest with this poem.
Kundu Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Thank you rob, and thank you for the contest!
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