Envy

Green.
It's not natural - nature's beautiful and free.
This colour, it confines me.
A steel cage bound in barbed wire.
Every escape route, a torturous invitation.
It controls me, possesses me.
My decisions and actions no longer my own.

No, not natural - artificial.
Made by man, by their mistakes.
So deadly ... Poisonous.
It dances; smiriking, mocking.
It glides, ripping my wounds.
Not natural, but still fresh.

The pain doubles and red seeps into green.
It injects it's fury, it's anger.
An explosive concoction.
It's subtle, hiding itself from view.
It sits ... no, it stalks.
This colour can not stay still,
never stopping its destructive path.
But it's too late, we're always too late.
Envy has pounced.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations Vicki, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol
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February 15, 2011 at 11:49 AM
I really like the way you describe the destructiveness of envy, Vicki. Well said. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 1:44 AM
Congrat's on your WIN vicki! Lainie
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations on your winning in Debbie's contest with this entry. It is quite descriptive.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:12 PM
Congrats Vicki on your success in Debbie's contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy...
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 6:46 AM
Vicki very good work your form is FREE VERSE, poems can not be ranked in conests labeled "I don't know" please change the form label. BIG thanks for the great entry! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Good one that is very descriptive and expressive for sure..I am glad that I stopped by to read about the green eyed monster..Sara
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