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Envious - Sonnet 11:22

This is the greatest struggle that mocks me, To be a distant sigh, caused by this queen; A rose that has yet to compliment thee, beyond the scope of eyes, already seen. There is mystery in her soft appeal, a humble frame that solicits my quest; and while life leaves us with answers concealed, I’m convinced this broad advance is perfect. For while life is bitter, this is pleasure; To gracefully shatter this mundane silence, and dispel the devils space, indeed clever; let’s rejoice in brief absence coined timeless. With these tendencies forever burning, may this one flesh never cease from yearning.

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Date: 4/22/2016 11:07:00 AM
Jiril, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:56:00 PM
Very enjoyable write.
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 9/14/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/7/2015 6:00:00 PM
I look forward to reading more of your works my friend.
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:59:00 PM
Very happy to be the first to note how very good this sonnet is! A true pleasure to read and to contemplate.. A7
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Jiril Clemons
Date: 8/7/2015 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Robert.

Book: Shattered Sighs