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Entwined - Poetry Contest

Once two hearts entwined into one Body and soul drunken embrace fusion Sunshine and starry skies we couldn't ignore On wings we use to soar Fly forever and never fly away Love I thought would always stay A desire to rekindle the drop of love left Dry the river of tears I have shed Under my skin sweet whisper Yearns, but also forages anger Though reclusive, in my solitude Escape is an illusion to elude Quivering rumbles feelings of disquietude Our soul’s no longer entwined, but brewed This journey has ended, it’s time to say goodbye 2/9/2016 Poetry Contest: Entwined Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 2/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:44:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:44:00 AM
Sad but relevant write, Eve. It's more the norm than everlasting love.
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 2/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I agree, sad and beautiful. Well written.
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 2/23/2016 12:42:00 AM
sad and beautiful!..special congrats on your win, eve, and huggs
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thank you!! Hugs Eve
Date: 2/22/2016 10:13:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/23/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you!!! Hugs Eve
Date: 2/21/2016 11:12:00 AM
Lovely! Bravo Poet!
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you!! Hugs Eve
Date: 2/9/2016 3:57:00 PM
another one that has sad overtones. VEry lovely write, Eve.
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :) Hugs Eve
Date: 2/9/2016 1:16:00 PM
i didn't anticipate the twist in the end, eve.. a towering, beautiful write, sad yet well quilled!..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Nette :) Hugs Eve
Date: 2/9/2016 12:36:00 PM
Very sad poem filled with passion. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, BL Devnath, and for the best wishes :) Hugs Eve
Date: 2/9/2016 9:28:00 AM
A 7 for sure--this poem conveys the theme of how passion cools over time. Janice
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2016 4:00:00 PM
"Thank you, Janice, and for the 7! I guess that is why they call it the 7 year itch :) Hugs Eve"
Date: 2/9/2016 5:30:00 AM
I really like your poem. I know how you feel, my spouse took off after 25 yrs of marriage, so I can relate.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2016 4:01:00 PM
"Thank you, Daniel. Relationships can be hard sometimes Hugs Eve"

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