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Entreating Evening

The evening's grieving the icy night's kiss of mist as the dawn yawns. 3/23/20

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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/11/2020 7:34:00 AM
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I like that ...
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/1/2020 11:30:00 PM
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Felt like I was waking up in the wee hours of the morning. Good imagery. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 9:24:00 PM
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Creative imagery!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/28/2020 11:13:00 PM
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Brrrrr. Let's have chile instead of more chilly. Smiles, Gershon
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/28/2020 8:21:00 PM
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Sparse and yet so expansive as touching the limitless expanse. How expressive you are. A blessing to read.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 12:52:00 PM
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spectacular imagery Michelle...we had some cool temps back with rainy rises.. could see this one perfectly...stay safe... hugs
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Harry Horsman
Date: 3/23/2020 10:30:00 PM
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Hopefully the day shining and bright, you wrote this as it is, Michelle. excellent muse.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/23/2020 3:05:00 PM
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You are giving me the chills! Bring on the sunshine! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2020 7:58:00 PM
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It is raining here today - I hope the sun comes back soon!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/23/2020 2:24:00 PM
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I think your line is a breather of senses, wonderfully written dear poet friend, keep well xo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2020 7:58:00 PM
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You also, thanks for your visit!
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John Watt
Date: 3/23/2020 1:58:00 PM
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Michelle, I so enjoy your word play with this monoku: evening/grieving, icy/night, kiss/mist, dawn/yawn. Much enjoyed ~ John
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2020 7:57:00 PM
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And I enjoyed your comment, thank you, John!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/23/2020 1:55:00 PM
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A moist kiss...to invigorate the morning...Nice one
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2020 7:56:00 PM
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Thank you for your kind comment, Arturo

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