Enticing Desire

Enchanting me with your lust,
drawing me into the fire,
of your burning desire,
passion in your eyes.



For the spicy contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Duncan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 11:09 PM
Oh, I do love this kind of talk Phyllis ;} thanks for reading over heard conversation. he was always saying mean things to the girlfriend.
Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Ooo la la Phyllis, spicy or what. Lovely Dodoitsu. Many thank you's for your always kind comments....:)
Freeman Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Great Job Phyllis with this dodoitsu with the internal rhyme too. Agape, Moses
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:17 AM
dear mama, your poetic devise has taken a new dimension. great work.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:57 PM
thankxx Phyllis for your wonderful comment today on my contest entry for Joyce... I too luv all animals but dogs always... we currently have a Shepherd puppy who is naughty and nice... he is the king of this family.. luv.. so glad Joyce chose this fine theme..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Good Morning Phyllis... hope u have a blessed day my friend... with luv..
La France Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 3:21 AM
This is really romantic with a nice hint of spice, best of luck in the contest~~
Peranteau Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 1:38 AM
Tiz definately "spicy" dear poet ! Great write Phyllis ! much love, james
Anderson Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:16 PM
Very nice poem...Good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:43 PM
Soup Mail..
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Phyllis, so nice to see a new poem of yours up. I enjoyed it and wish you well in the contest. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Nice sensual and passionate write, Phyllis
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Great job Phyllis.. but who told u ..u could not use that title before? please let me know my friend.. thankxxx..
Walsh Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Gorgeous - Liz
Loving Iii Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:39 AM
what every man needs , a willing subject. lol john
George   Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Wow!!!! A winner in my books. Thank you for your kind comments today, Phyllis. If you are referring to the Contest, 'Among the Dead - the Heroine to be a girl named Raven, I have written two of them - so inspired was I by the picture constance posted - The Raven's Revenge and Where the Raven Reigns. I just love writing stories about paintings. Lainie.
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Phyllis. looks like a winner. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Wow! Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I read this one this morn for I needed a little warmth on this cold, cloudy, and rainy day in Georgia..Your presence at my work sent me a ray not a stingray but a sun ray..Sara
Hb Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Short and sweet (or spicy?) I liked it. I have a poem of the same name :) Seems to be a popular theme.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:49 AM
thankxx for supporting Michael's part of the contest Phyllis and good luck .. we will read fully closer to judging time ... appreciate your participation with luv..
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