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Enthralled

Enthralled I am taken with you... My eyes can not turn away from the attraction I feel in my bones. I am enthralled by your very presence... If I am not with you I seek you out. My desires begin and end with you... I am enthralled by your very presence... A deep raven is where I will fall to my death for you... My mind is rendered useless when around you. I am enthralled by your very presence... You have put me in an enchantment when your eyes look into mine... Dare I ever look away I may never come back. I am enthralled by your very presence... 11/6/14

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Date: 4/30/2015 10:37:00 AM
When you login on the left side near the top, you will have a choice to click on PROFILE, once there you can edit your profile, scroll down and make sure the the options concerning mail, you have them selected as yes! If you have any problems you can ask me here!
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Meg Anderson
Date: 4/30/2015 10:46:00 AM
ok... I think I figured it out now. lol. thanks. Meg
Date: 4/28/2015 1:28:00 PM
Beautiful Meg, I wanted to soupmail you but see that is not enabled. Not sure if is on purpose on not.
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Date: 4/30/2015 9:54:00 AM
Hey I am still learning how to use this poetry soup thing. I do not know how to not have the soupmail enabled. I would not mind receiving messages. I get email all the time from poetry soup but not from specific members. Take care.
Date: 12/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece meg
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/17/2014 6:42:00 PM
Liam, thank you for reading! This one was written with passion and enchantment.

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