Entangled

She is still  a woman~
Even if she  is weak and  IMPERFECT~
But it doesn’t mean she is BROKEN;
Despite those  pillars  that  have  been CRACKED 
when  tremor  came to her silent FACADE 
and  ruined her sanctuary~
Her sacred  paradigm  still stood.

She is still a woman~
Who sees what is  beyond~
Despite the MASK that entangled her
to a liverish labyrinths of make-believe;
She still believes in you.

She is still a woman~
Who was TORN between time and space~
An all-time warrior, though wounded and FLAWED;
Traversed the quandary beyond untrodden paths
and climbed through endless heights;
And though crippled and creased, she rose like phoenix ~
to see what lies above each passing cloud,
to prove that she is not an ILLUSION
but still a real woman in your eyes.



June 22, 2021

Writing Prompt- Flawed- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
2nd place

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Date: 2/10/2022 10:41:00 PM
She is a paragon of a woman ! Though tormented and flawed she has risen like a phoenix ! She has her eyes opened to the future possibilities . An inspiring write, Jez
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:18:00 AM
So much hope here! "An all-time warrior, though wounded and FLAWED; Traversed the quandary beyond untrodden paths and climbed through endless heights; And though crippled and creased, she rose like phoenix ~" Wow!
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Date: 7/20/2021 10:08:00 AM
Yes, beautiful creation as Anita J says. And has a fine flow, spontaneous, congrats for a fine win.ABT
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Date: 7/6/2021 3:53:00 AM
What a beautiful creation dear JCB... I loved the repetition in the beginning of each stanza... 'TORN between time and space'... 'though crippled and creased, she rose like a Phoenix'... loved these lines... Congrats on your win my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:50:00 AM
Well spoken, very enjoyable!
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Date: 6/29/2021 3:45:00 PM
My friend, congratulations on your win. A truly wonderful creation, a most definite fav too. God bless...
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Date: 6/25/2021 4:53:00 PM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your wonderful poem. Good use of the required words, love _ Constance
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:29:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart. Your contest theme inspired many of us when we run out of ink! Best wishes!
Date: 6/24/2021 8:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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JCB Brul
Date: 6/25/2021 5:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/24/2021 11:19:00 AM
- A wonderful poem ... a real woman she is - Best wishes in the contest, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:30:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise. Get well very soon!
Date: 6/23/2021 7:55:00 AM
I like where you took the word prompts. Vulnerable yet empowering.
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Juliet for your inspiring feedback. Blessings.
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JCB Brul
Date: 6/25/2021 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Juliet for your inspiring feedback. Blessings.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful and skillfully done. A lovely write. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/25/2021 5:31:00 PM
Thank dear Gina. More blessings.
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