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Quietude endows hushed mystical space Admonishing words have no role to play— Look how in solitude its posture bends Bowing in deference to calming intellect. Listen to the utterance of wailing heart Where grieved voices subtly resonate In stygian echoes of aches and pain As bawl of mortal life kneels down to pray. Touch of gifted hands magically illuminates Enlightenment of soul’s secret message Setting aside obtuse incredulous images, Silencing the whims of infuriating regrets. Glowing in epiphany of truths ornate Emanating from the heart’s regal reign, Voice of divinity in conquest reverberates Winning decisively dissonant arguments. Gaining wisdom of supreme knowledge, Free from shackles of ordinary, mundane; Revelations disarm the earthly laments Basking in discovery of heavenly solace. March 2, 2020 Poem of the week on March 8, 2020 Placed 1st: Picture prompt poetry contest Sponsor: Brenda Chiri Placed 2nd: Your Best Free Verse 2020 Poetry Contest By John Hamilton

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Date: 10/24/2020 7:39:00 PM
You portray solitude in a magical way in your words, Vijay. I enjoyed reading it. :)
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Date: 5/31/2020 6:28:00 PM
Vijay, it is a pleasure to return once more to offer you my congratulations for your excellent win in John's contest. The artistic and emotional beauty of your poetic expression is so very moving. Congratulations on your excellent win with this superb piece. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/26/2020 1:17:00 PM
I see I am really late for reading this masterpiece of yours Vijay. This is incredible and one of the best poems of yours that I have read. "Whims of infuriating regrets", "epiphany of truths" outstanding imagery blended with beautiful emotions. I am so happy to see this placed high in the contest. Keep writing and inspiring friend :)
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Date: 5/26/2020 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!!! Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:32:00 PM
Magical in its delivery of everyone's Peace. Love it Vijay
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Date: 5/25/2020 8:18:00 PM
A great piece..feels like to go on reading your lines..they come like sea waves .. always enchanting to devour the beauty...you are an enlightenment in this group
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Date: 5/25/2020 7:13:00 PM
What an amazing write Vijay, congrats on a great win!
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Date: 3/28/2020 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations!Very beautifully penned.Stay safe ,have a good day.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2020 6:23:00 AM
Much appreciate--many thanks, Kenisha.
Date: 3/24/2020 11:43:00 AM
Beatiful piece, well delivered, calming tones.. I loved.. \Blessings
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/24/2020 1:08:00 PM
much appreciate Lewis--many thanks.
Date: 3/21/2020 9:04:00 PM
Not bad, not bad at all.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 3/20/2020 10:38:00 PM
Vijay, your beautiful artistry never fails to inspire or impress me. I love the soulful atmosphere your wonderful word choices create. The serenity of the last line is simply splendid. Congratulations for all the wonderful honors bestowed upon this profound masterwork. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/21/2020 7:08:00 AM
Your comments are so special my friend--many thanks for your visit--much appreciate, Susan.
Date: 3/20/2020 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Vijay. Absolutely enjoyed your gem, my friend.. Your amazing talent continues to shine! So glorious!! This is going right to my favs.. Bravo!!
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Date: 3/21/2020 7:03:00 AM
That is so very kind of you--thank you my friend--much appreciate the kind remarks, Robertina. Many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 3/16/2020 8:48:00 PM
Beautifully penned, "Glowing in epiphany of truths ornate Emanating from the heart’s regal reign,"; great lines. Congratulations on your POTW and your win.
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Date: 3/17/2020 7:11:00 AM
Much appreciate--many thanks, MLK.
Date: 3/14/2020 4:52:00 PM
Big congrats for POTW, Vijay! I enjoyed your homage to peace and quietude. "Basking in discovery of heavenly solace" ~ John
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2020 7:03:00 AM
Much appreciate John--many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2020 8:15:00 AM
Congrats!! Vijay...great poetry my friend...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 3/14/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you WW--much appreciate.
Date: 3/12/2020 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on the great win, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2020 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 3/11/2020 9:52:00 PM
Vijay congrats on your top win!;)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2020 6:59:00 AM
Much appreciate Brenda--many thanks for holding contests...not an easy task.
Date: 3/10/2020 2:26:00 PM
Hi Vijay as I was reading this poem I thought yo myself this is definitely a POTD but POTW - kudos dear Vijay, an outstanding poem Blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/10/2020 4:24:00 PM
So glad you liked the poem--much appreciate, Jennifer--many thanks for the kind remarks.
Date: 3/9/2020 6:47:00 PM
POTW.Wow, congratulations, my friend
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:47:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Andrea.
Date: 3/9/2020 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful Vijay. Brings the soul an overall calm. “Emanating the hearts regal reign” my favorite passage. Kelli
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:46:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Kelli--many thanks.
Date: 3/9/2020 5:47:00 PM
Your muse knows no boundaries dear Vijay, your poetry always full of potential. Thank you for sharing today. xo
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:45:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Date: 3/9/2020 9:19:00 AM
I was going to write this should be POTD and I see it’s POTW. Way to go!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2020 11:26:00 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Richard--many thanks.
Date: 3/8/2020 8:36:00 PM
A well deserved POTW Vijay ~ congratulations :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2020 7:21:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks, PM.
Date: 3/8/2020 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on having this outstanding poem honored with POTW Vijay! A very deserving choice. xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Connie--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 3/8/2020 3:34:00 PM
Wow this is one of the best I've seen for this contest .. your choice of words are brilliant and I see you have the honour of POTW... Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2020 6:52:00 AM
Much appreciate SO--many thanks for your kind remarks.
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