enjoy walking

Why walk fast,
If we enjoy walking slowly?

Birds are a part of the puzzle,
Intelligence is part of the puzzle,
The trees too,

Walking alone allows you to find other pieces
missing.



Pourquoi marcher vite,
Si on apprécie de marcher lentement ?

Les oiseaux sont une partie du puzzle,
L’intelligence est une partie du puzzle,
Les arbres aussi,

Marcher permet de trouver d’autres pièces
manquantes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/20/2025 8:52:00 PM
I love a good walk- deep advice
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2025 4:41:00 PM
Your poem wonderfully evokes the joys of a visually pleasing and healthy activity, Yann. Solo walking really is wonderful, too. I enjoyed this a lot. Blessings
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/10/2025 2:55:00 AM
thanks evelyn, for the comprehensive and warm comment, i walk every day two hours, cause now i am retired have a nice day
Date: 3/7/2025 2:33:00 AM
I love the calm relaxed feel of this poem Yann….so much in life is so fast paced so why not keep walking slow and enjoy the environment and our thoughts! Debx
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/7/2025 7:49:00 AM
thanks deb for stopping by and comprehension, i need calm very soon, and walk every morning blessings
Date: 3/3/2025 7:34:00 AM
Dear Yann, This is such a calm poem, your poetic voice is so soft and smooth, and i agree sometimes we need to slow down, go with the flow, embrace littl things around us , and sometimes walking alone can give us so many answers. I love how youv written "Birds are a part of the puzzle, Intelligence is part of the puzzle, The trees too," so much depth in that! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/7/2025 1:16:00 AM
dear ie, thank you very much for the supportive words, your voice is so precious , have a nice week end
Date: 3/1/2025 5:40:00 PM
Your poem has a gentle, meditative quality, encouraging mindfulness and appreciation for the act of walking. The repetition of "puzzle" as a metaphor for life and discovery is a nice touch--it suggests that by slowing down, we can notice the missing pieces that might otherwise be overlooked.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/2/2025 11:35:00 PM
thank you so much Alesia for the enlightening comment wish you an happy day
Date: 3/1/2025 1:20:00 PM
After my walk through this, I feel more relaxed Already. As if it was 'long form you end up running to get to the finish.' Good one Yank.'
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/2/2025 11:36:00 PM
thank you so much Joe for the supportive words blessings
Date: 3/1/2025 7:33:00 AM
I enjoy this helpful thought, and the French translation. I have learned a new French word; vite must be adverb fast. I think you've inspired me to learn French. I'm also going to get back to walking.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/1/2025 9:29:00 AM
thank you so much Hilda for the supportive comment,, yes "vite" means "fast", more used in french than "rapide" enjoy your sunday
Date: 2/28/2025 10:04:00 PM
A good exercise to go out together walking slowly.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/1/2025 3:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Akham, a pleasure to read your comments have a nice day
Date: 2/28/2025 5:04:00 PM
When you walk too fast you get to miss out on things that you might otherwise have enjoyed through as slow walk. Nice poem.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/1/2025 3:25:00 AM
thanks Rose for being so supportive, blessings
Date: 2/28/2025 1:03:00 PM
I love this! Exactly! We walk slowly because it allows us to think and enjoy.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 3/1/2025 3:24:00 AM
thanks Ann, you really read my mind have a nice saturday
Date: 2/28/2025 3:45:00 AM
Walking is a good exercise. It activates our mind and body. Brisk walking is more advisable than walking slow. Well said, dear Yaan.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2025 7:25:00 AM
thanks dear valsa for the precious and graceful comment have a sweet week end
Date: 2/27/2025 10:15:00 PM
So thoughtful and cute.
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2025 7:26:00 AM
thanks andrea for being supportive enjoy your week end
Date: 2/27/2025 2:05:00 PM
Yes, slow down and live, really live. I enjoy the nice thoughts penned. Sara K
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2025 7:27:00 AM
thanks sara for the comprehensive and kind words, this is so cute have a nice day
Date: 2/27/2025 10:42:00 AM
- I do it every day all year round... (with my two dogs) ... watching and listening to nature :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2025 7:28:00 AM
thanks Anne lise for stopping by and being listening i say hello to your two dogs
Date: 2/27/2025 10:31:00 AM
Walking slowly and alone allow one to see and hear the world of birds, trees and other things. I hate when I come across someone wearing earbuds, who cut themselves off from the world. I might have one earbud (rarely) but am always ready to interact. Plus they are missing out on the world around them. JMO!
Login to Reply
Rolland Avatar
Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2025 7:32:00 AM
o dear Kim, your words are solacing ad comprehensive from the world, i don't wear earbud too, prefer hear birds and trees, your comment is a very clever and supportive one, blessings to you and family
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad