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April-29-2025
Write Fourteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
~ PLACED FIRST~

 

“Each morning is an invaluable gift- To be alive is a boon, to be able to stay healthy is a bonus, to enjoy love and beauty is bliss”- By Poet Early morn, I wake up from my sleep, Sensing on my cheeks, dawn’s first gentle kiss. As the shroud of gloom is lifted off from earth’s face, In my heart rises sweet whispers of bliss. Yesterday’s mistakes, gone like vaporous nothings. A calming peace gently overpowers my soul. The air is crisp, quiet and pleasantly still. The morn opens new scenes and vistas whole. Flowers gently sway in the passing breeze. Bees buzz around, not giving rest to tiny wings. Coloured confetti fall from the Gulmohar tree. Butterflies flit around as my soul in joy, sings. Remember, how lucky we are to see another sunrise, To savour what nature offers as an inestimable prize!

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Date: 5/9/2025 11:07:00 PM
Beautiful! Oh, how wonderful is your sweet poem Valsa! I love it so much. Genuinely blessed my heart <3
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Date: 5/6/2025 8:51:00 AM
Love "Yesterday’s mistakes, gone like vaporous nothings." and your concluding two lines dear Valsa. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 5/4/2025 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/quote/pretty picture and great ending. Love This One... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/3/2025 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your top win in this poetry contest wit a lovely poem on the joy of simple living and appreciating what nature offers. Wish you seeing many many a sunrise.
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Date: 5/3/2025 9:21:00 AM
Hi, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/1/2025 7:36:00 PM
Dear Valsa, this is a great poem that praises the splendor of another day and the rebirth it provides. It stresses the joy and tranquility found in nature, as well as the hope that greets daybreak, reinforcing the value of enjoying life and every day. The poem also dwells on the sunrise experience, stressing the sensory aspects of dawn, the peace of nature, and the sense of regrowth that comes with a new day. It compares previous missteps with the new prospects that each dawn brings.
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Date: 4/29/2025 4:18:00 PM
Excellent it is like a non traditional sonnet
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Date: 4/29/2025 10:10:00 AM
True, towake up next day is truely a blessing in old age. Nice quote.
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Date: 4/29/2025 6:47:00 AM
Each day is a blessing of life, and a chance for renewal of experience and purpose. Lovely read with or without coffee. Have a great day my friend!
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Date: 4/29/2025 5:46:00 AM
Ah sweet valsa, what a beautiful and gentle reminder youv passed on here in such a poetic manner! Sometimes we forget to appreciate little things in life like simply just existing and being able to see the light of dawn, and to feel the warm of the sun on our skin! I really love the flow and cadence of your poem and how youv especially written "Coloured confetti fall from the Gulmohar tree. Butterflies flit around as my soul in joy, sings." Stunning! Simply magical! Absolute pleasure reading! Another fave for me it is! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/29/2025 5:16:00 AM
- A beautiful poem... I love your quote, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/29/2025 5:05:00 AM
Hello Valsa, this is truly a beautiful write. To see a new day is a blessing. This is a winner for sure. Good luck with the contest my friend.
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Date: 4/29/2025 3:39:00 AM
Yes, each morning is a gift from God. One more day to live in His beautiful creation and enjoy the gift of His love. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/29/2025 2:53:00 AM
This is a beautiful sonnet. So much marvellous imagery. Best for a win. You deserve it, dear Valsa.
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