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Engraved Memory

Since you left my vision I’ve missed you every day There’s so much left undone and so much I want to say You hugged me tight with your eyes, your heart, and your velvety fur You had a presence that could lure Any soul in your radar Your energy so strong and pure Hush the stars above You’re a vision of A park with glaring sun and the crystal snowdrop close up Of a soaring dove Although you did not leave a dynasty For the world to love You left an engraved memory That time could not briskly smudge Everything you taught me Will lead me far in life Although you’re no longer in my vision to see I still feel your presence here Surrounding me When I look towards the stars past The clouds up high I know the stars will hush for you right now The reason they do Is so you can come through To shine down your hope and love Right into my soul A heart once turned as black as coal Has now turned pink and lean For the love you send down to me Is pure and pristine I know I’ll see you again someday So I shall wait for you Patiently in my dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 8:55:00 AM
Hey Sarah, stopped by for a visit. This is such a sweet and loving tribute to your loved one. So beautifully written and expressed. Thanks for sharing it with us. Be Blessed, Neva
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Sarah Linklater
Date: 3/26/2015 3:55:00 PM
Hey Neva, Thank you so much and nice of you to visit, He meant the world to me. Sarah.
Date: 3/26/2015 1:30:00 AM
Very well written. Well done. Everyone can only hope to be thought of as you have described a soul here. The good one always leave early. Well pend :-)
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:57:00 PM
Hey Vintage Sparrow, Thank you so much and aye tis true they do, glad you enjoyed the read :~) Sarah.
Date: 3/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
Yes Sarah, good memories make a good source of consolation for us especially when we lost the irreplaceable. Emotions rise and rise as one goes through your lines in this creative piece!
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Hassan and yes they do, glad you enjoyed the read and felt the emotions intended. Sarah.
Date: 3/14/2015 7:46:00 PM
Sarah, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thanks for the comments and support guys means alot.
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:31:00 AM
Sarah,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:52:00 PM
A beautiful beast
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:52:00 PM
Touching with a hopeful end. #7
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