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unrhymed couplets 

Clearly cut starlight jewels twinkle star of stars 
whispering seas turning tides move under waves

From within the sand their remains footprints 
unfolding electromagnetically radiation beams

You are filtered through darkness love
emitting the most beautiful of light

Warm holding forever priceless clarity 
silver lining every cradle under the moon howls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/26/2017 3:39:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD honor. What a beautiful poem with such a radiant and meaningful message!! Cheers and Best Wishes . . . Gary
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Date: 12/23/2017 2:13:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 12/23/2017 1:50:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Liam :) - Congratulations with your p.o.t.d. - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - (Hope you received my Christmas post :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:54:00 AM
This is gorgeous. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:20:00 AM
So much eternal meaning! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:10:00 AM
Liam, congratulations on POTD with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor !
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations Liam for POTD honors...
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/23/2017 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! Very beautiful words
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Date: 12/23/2017 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful poem, liam, congratulations on POTD ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/23/2017 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations Liam...much deserved for this excellent poem.
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Date: 12/23/2017 7:11:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. Very beautiful Christmas love poem! Very golden glowing pen!Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you! Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 12/23/2017 6:44:00 AM
These are great words! A very beautiful poem that is very deserving of POTD.
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Date: 12/23/2017 5:05:00 AM
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Date: 12/22/2017 8:40:00 PM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, Christmas poem filled of light, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, please take good care of yourself,Liam!:) I wish you n' your very dear family a very Merry Christmas, n' Happy New Year, filled with lots of love, joy, hope,happiness, health and peace!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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