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Engraved Deeply Bethlehem

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Clearly cut starlight jewels twinkle star of stars whispering seas turning tides move under waves From within the sand their remains footprints unfolding electromagnetically radiation beams You are filtered through darkness love emitting the most beautiful of light Warm holding forever priceless clarity silver lining every cradle under the moon howls

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Gary Bateman

Date: 12/26/2017 3:39:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations on the POTD honor. What a beautiful poem with such a radiant and meaningful message!! Cheers and Best Wishes . . . Gary

Rick Folker

Date: 12/23/2017 2:13:00 PM

nice one

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2017 1:50:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Liam :) - Congratulations with your p.o.t.d. - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - (Hope you received my Christmas post :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 12/23/2017 11:54:00 AM

This is gorgeous. Congrats on POTD.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/23/2017 10:20:00 AM

So much eternal meaning! Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 12/23/2017 10:10:00 AM

Liam, congratulations on POTD with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor !

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/23/2017 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations Liam for POTD honors...

Joseph May

Date: 12/23/2017 10:05:00 AM

Congrats on POTD

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 12/23/2017 9:26:00 AM

Congrats on POTD! Very beautiful words

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2017 9:13:00 AM

Beautiful poem, liam, congratulations on POTD ! Hugs Eve

Donna Loughman

Date: 12/23/2017 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations Liam...much deserved for this excellent poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/23/2017 7:11:00 AM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. Very beautiful Christmas love poem! Very golden glowing pen!Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you! Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

James Swartz

Date: 12/23/2017 6:44:00 AM

These are great words! A very beautiful poem that is very deserving of POTD.

Alex Shevchenko

Date: 12/23/2017 5:05:00 AM

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/22/2017 8:40:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, Christmas poem filled of light, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, please take good care of yourself,Liam!:) I wish you n' your very dear family a very Merry Christmas, n' Happy New Year, filled with lots of love, joy, hope,happiness, health and peace!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^