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Enemy Wear

"Enemy Suit"

If you are my online styling enemy, 
Then I love you more than poop and snakes combine 
I'd pray to God, every night, 
'Ask him to fill your room with termites 
Once in a while, I'd ask him to give you grace 
In hopes today, you don't expose the green monster face 
Enough said for the time to be.

To:
My dearest enemy, my mentor
I want you to know, you taught me well
Tonight I Will Put On My Enemy's Clothes
And I'll be the fake friend that hugs you
 

Hugs, Hugs, Love, Love Linda

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Cherl Dunn September 16, 2015 at 9:05 PM Dear Linda LOL i hope I never become your enemy because I hate the smell of poop to be honest with you, but this poem does not stink at all it is funny to read, and I hope be stay on the best of terms because termites are creepy, cheri

Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 8:13 PM Well my enemies don't call me at all...

Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 8:12 PM My enemies?

Patrick Boyle September 17, 2014 at 9:32 PM Wow, To: PD the friend that hugs, love that.

Maurice Yvonne September 2, 2014 at 1:39 PM the trick with edgy poetry is to still keep it beautiful sounding to the ear. You achieved that in spades.

Debbie Guzzi August 26, 2014 at 5:09 PM ah yes, this is a truth of which I am aware. Take Care ... write well!

Anna-Marie Docherty July 30, 2014 at 2:52 AM Oooo that's a good old fashioned sting in the tale if ever there was one! What a write, you nailed your point!

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 28, 2014 at 10:37 PM another 7 RATE FOR SHIGGLES AND gHITS!

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 28, 2014 at 10:35 PM I got mad love for Linda Linda my DeeStroyuh,, my enemy pretendah....This one rocks the boat and you know this> Did I ever tell you my wife in a former life's name was Linda,,,,yes Linda Bukowski is still alive, But I HanK BuK the big DukeR am dead, reincarnated, stuck as a hack writer....I wanna go back in life and Re Write Ham On Rye! & 7 rate straight up in the air on this one!

Robin Davis June 18, 2014 at 10:26 PM PD What a powerful and deep write. I could feel your emotions through each line, Thank you for the nice comment on my Cheating Hearts Poem.

... Gigno June 9, 2014 at 10:18 PM !!!

Mel Merrill June 4, 2014 at 12:31 PM Hi Linda. There's a lot of emotion in that ending...and throughout. I wonder if those clothes would fit me :) I've had some online experiences that are heartbreaking--fake friends? Yep.

Christopher Flaherty May 23, 2014 at 7:14 AM Hi Linda hows it going Poet .D Enemies suits are pretty easy to see through its those fake and condescending ones dressed up as friends you have to weed out of there camoflauge. Liked it very nice happy writing bud have a nice weekend.Cheers Chris

Faye Gibson May 21, 2014 at 3:04 PM Quite a poem, Linda; well written and stinging.

Ravi Sathasivam May 21, 2014 at 1:36 AM Why enemy? You offer others anything but encouragement. Nice write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jessica Thompson May 20, 2014 at 1:38 PM It is not hard to relate, and I get what you are saying. Good job! :)

Deborah Shiells May 19, 2014 at 10:57 AM Hi Linda, You are the talented writer my friend. I enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah

Diane Christian May 18, 2014 at 5:30 PM the monster thing

Diane Christian May 18, 2014 at 5:29 PM a good poem, sounds like a two faced thing, jekyll and hyde

Carl Fraser May 18, 2014 at 1:57 PM Looks like a work in progress, if so please let me know since now youve got my attention, luv Carl

Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 5:34 PM The phrase Wolf in sheep's clothing springs to mind Linda. You have always given me fabulous encouragement. I do love the cynicism in the final verse hugs hugs hugs Jan x

Farhana Akter May 16, 2014 at 4:32 PM like

Ken Carroll May 16, 2014 at 2:44 PM Buen dia Linda..Thought provoking write..Buen trabajo! Ken

Jake Ponce May 16, 2014 at 12:45 PM I love how I'm seeing a teacher-student conflict here. You're always great, Linda!

Scott Thirtyseven May 16, 2014 at 6:37 AM Straight talk'n love straight talk'n, I'm an Australian male we don't understand anything else. Oh hang on, you're not talking about me?? Oh. of course I am not the teacher with you, only the humble student.

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