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With unmerciful intensity is the ringing, the sound of my voice but I'm not singing. No music in delightful chords do I hear, Only incessant echoes play on in my ear. Over and over, are the diminishing sounds, Like the baying howls of fox-chasing hounds. What words are those, so repeatedly given until to the brink of insanity I am driven? As in a canyon, whose walls reach so high, I cannot staunch the words that I hear cry. They blare at first, then gradually drift afar repeatedly saying, "Scars from the warrrr." Such sinister words, 'scars and war,' an eerie pair, Why does hearing them cause me pain and despair? There they go again and again, but why should I care? Echoing, "Scars from the warrrr, more than I can bearrrr." Fear reached inside and nearly consumed my heart. I had a memory of a death, forgotten, so I thought. Those echoed words were the ones I had cried, when I heard the reason why my husband died. "Scars from the warrrr," the last words I remember, echo inside my head; an eternal smoldering ember. December 12th 2015 Where Echoes Hide Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 12/23/2015 2:18:00 AM
Brilliant poem indeed.... Congrats for your WIN in the Echoes Contest, Lin! ;-)
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Date: 12/23/2015 4:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Teddy, for such a nice compliment.
Date: 12/22/2015 1:53:00 AM
Lovely write n win Lin.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/22/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Upma ;)
Date: 12/21/2015 10:12:00 PM
Congrats Lin fine write, seemed real to me.
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Date: 12/22/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, John
Date: 12/21/2015 9:30:00 PM
Lin, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/22/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 12/21/2015 8:16:00 PM
Heartfelt Lin. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/22/2015 3:46:00 AM
Thanks, Michael.
Date: 12/21/2015 5:49:00 PM
The "other" side of PTSD....the family and loved ones who must deal with the "wounds and scars of war". A sad but true state. Thanks for participating in the contest Lin.
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:05:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, John.
Date: 12/12/2015 7:47:00 PM
Dear Lin Lane What words of emotional expression are shown here my dearest lady, so sad but yet it is a wonderful tribute to the feelings you and your husband shared together, awesome images you put within the minds of your readers I almost cried when I read this piece, Scars from the war LOVE these lines totally, very inspirational, glad I came by your site tonight and read this one my friend, cheri this is a seven in my book!
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Date: 12/12/2015 8:03:00 PM
I certainly do love your visits. They are full of lovely things you say. Thank you, ma'am.

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