Endless Dreams

Plagues ruin dreams ~ my heart beats eternal *For Brian's contest

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Robert Ptolemy

Date: 7/23/2009 1:51:00 AM

Nice, kind mini-epic. well done

Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/19/2009 11:28:00 AM

Wow you have totally blown my mind with this one. I hope that this plague doesn't win. Ruin is not indicative to defeat, but a substancial setback. I do not beieve in my heart that anything could possibly destroy your dreams James Goff! Thanks for your uplifting, always welcome, commentsand poetry. I enjoy them immensely!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/19/2009 8:40:00 AM

Wow....yes indeed....this looks like a winner, James!! Great one for the contest!! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/19/2009 7:02:00 AM

your voice in this poem is loud--i love it and going to my favs Jim--charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/19/2009 5:37:00 AM

Oh, James, how true those words are. Very nice, DAS-J

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/19/2009 1:00:00 AM

And long may it beat onnnnnnnn , JMG . Best of luck in the contest ..

Brian Strand

Date: 7/19/2009 12:13:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian

Cesar Cantu

Date: 7/18/2009 11:43:00 PM

@.@ Wow, this was fast jojojo an pretty interesting!!! "Plagues ruin dreams".... I guess they do, and sometimes there's nothing we can do about it but to build them all over again jojojo thanks for the experience yei!!!=D

John Freeman

Date: 7/18/2009 11:17:00 PM

Your poem, James speaks truth. exellent! Godly love Moses