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Endless Winter

ENDLESS WINTER There’s a big to do On the high Olympus Mount He in charge of spring Has wandered off taken wing And the wild snow piles higher Zeus is so angry God Winter rages uncheck’d All is ice covered Wife Hera scolds day and night Athena shivers a fright A search is begun Have you seen spring anyone And at last he’s found Sleeping in some Shangri La A land of eternal sun

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2015 7:54:00 PM

It was nice to reread this one. I really liked it and had not really remembered it!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/4/2012 5:47:00 PM

Had to read this one Daver, It's just getting started this year and I was lloking for some hope but it sounds pretty bleak. Great write on a cool subject! :)

James Foulk

Date: 4/12/2011 1:09:00 PM

a beautiful write, enjoyed this one, just glad winter is over. thank you for reading a rose fell, it is based on this little 6 year old girl. we knew in 1976, her family and her lived downstairs, they use to play with my son Rob when he was 6 years old. any way she was hit and killed by a car. we went to her funeral and that little coffin tore me up, i will never forget it.

Elaine George

Date: 3/24/2011 6:06:00 PM

Yeh! I hear ya! It snowed here yesterday - 5 inches. Will it ever end? Just one crocus if you please. bfn dear Dave. Lainie

James Peranteau

Date: 3/23/2011 6:31:00 AM

Hi Dave...I see you are still searching for spring dear poet...lol ! Hang in there Sir, it's on its way ! Great write by the way ! Have a great last few chilly dayz my friend ! much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 5:44:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Daver. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 11:31:00 PM

oh, boy, you just are not letting up on this winter hanging around.hahaha. LOve it, DAver. And the difference between the two girls in my wedding poem: the first girl only wanted the "dream" of wedding. The second girl cared more for making a marriage work! well, time for bed. I aleady ran a half hour past my time I gave myself to be here. GEEEZ

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/22/2011 8:41:00 PM

How selfish of spring, Daver! He'll have to do lots of overtime to make up for this neglect of duties. LOL This, I enjoyed lots, Daver. Hope all is well with you and rest of family. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2011 12:44:00 PM

What a magnificent picture of the mythological tale you have woven leading to the land of eternal sun, Shangri La, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2011 10:15:00 AM

Like the way you wove Greek mythology into this poem, Daver, but I can assure you some of us found spring in February. It's going to be 85 degrees here this afternoon. Wish I could go back a few weeks to days in the 70s. I'd give anything to see that snow and trade places so you could enjoy the "land of eternal sun." It's not all it's cracked up to be! The search should be coming to a close soon for you. :) Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/22/2011 8:58:00 AM

Wow, Dave, brilliant write! At leat spring is coming now! thank you for your kind comments always! And have a great week!...Love, Gert

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/22/2011 8:29:00 AM

ya and he can get his sorry butt back here anytime.... love it ( I see I am not the only one sick of winter)