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What goes up must always fall down In a world that's constantly trimming Heroes set out to destroy the clown An ending creates the beginning It's too hard to respect the deceiver An existence in control and regulation Extremely skeptic but also a believer In the beginning of an ending creation Drown in the river of mind's perception What's held down still will swim up Ascend in the spirit's proper direction After sinking in this world closed up Trickery throbs in the validity of time Even in sleep it sustains its spinning Lasting hurts, but demise is more sublime What ends will create the beginning

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Date: 8/23/2015 12:30:00 AM
Hi Joie, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/22/2015 7:14:00 PM
JOIE.. Your fabulous write is featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC
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Date: 8/9/2015 11:12:00 PM
Hi JOIE.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:32:00 AM
Joie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/2/2015 12:11:00 AM
Joie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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