Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Endings

Along the coast, I taste your scent

While vapor of mist claims the morn;

To brush spiced memoirs, now forlorn

Ending vows without my consent.



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Captcha Contest sponsored by Judy Konos
3/14/2015

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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 6:00 PM Nette, a nice win. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance April 29, 2015 at 2:58 PM Oh that is nice, Grats on your win ;)

Sara Kendrick April 29, 2015 at 2:24 PM Very good use of the Captcha..Way t go...Congrats..Sara

Nandita Das April 29, 2015 at 9:23 AM Very beautiful lines. Congratulations on your win.

Eve Roper April 29, 2015 at 12:13 AM Very beautiful, Nette , a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve

Mohan Chutani April 29, 2015 at 12:12 AM one sided endings leave a void. congrats Nette.

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2015 at 5:39 PM Very nice, Nette. how are you doing these days??

Edward Ebbs April 28, 2015 at 2:15 PM Congrats Nette :)

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:05 PM Nette, congrats on your win... Nice CAPTCHA entry... Love LINDA

Jan Allison April 28, 2015 at 12:20 PM Very moving Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos April 28, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thank you for entering my contest.

Monterey Sirak April 25, 2015 at 2:10 PM Wow! Your writing is always brilliant, and what inspiration you found in a captcha code.

Constance La France April 15, 2015 at 9:25 AM nette, beautiful words and lines, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Blossoms and Bubbles

Liam Mcdaid April 15, 2015 at 6:31 AM touching deeply beautiful pen nette wishing you a lovely week pal

Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 6:29 PM sadness runs throughout this poem Nette yet it is so beautiful too hugs 7

Bl Devnath April 14, 2015 at 1:10 PM A touching silence expressed so nicely that's hard to bear. Beautiful poem with poetic form. A 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Tim Ryerson April 14, 2015 at 9:45 AM Every line is a true gem as is your usual but the first 2 lines are my favs...Hope I'm not being too nosy here, but is this a true story my friend? Soup Mail me and let me know or are you still having technical problems? - Tim

M. L. Kiser April 14, 2015 at 9:27 AM Quite moving.

Sara Kendrick April 14, 2015 at 7:22 AM I really enjoyed the poetic quality of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 14, 2015 at 6:19 AM Lovely and graceful Netter as always, the 2nd and 3rd lines my faves..Hi Nette, thank you for supporting me in the contest.. natuloy ka sa Tugue? hope to see you soon//olive eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2015 at 4:33 AM - Touching ..... and lovely written, Nette - I wish you a great Tuesday / evening - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith April 13, 2015 at 11:39 PM To brush spiced memoirs...quite an image....lovely Tim