End of the Road - Steel Will and Iron Rails

Steel Will and Iron Rails


Hard rumbling click-clack – ever forward
locked within a destinations track
cursed by rising hills – unchanging future
choking on the smoke of looking back.

Driven by the pistons of life’s demons
time racing by its coldly focused eyes
condemned to ride into forever’s sunset
and never turn around to see it rise.

Shadows of the specter daily taunting
a loneliness that serves one selfish end
hope that ‘neath the cloak cold boney fingers
point to a place the endless track must bend.


12/30/2016

submitted to – Poet’s Choice – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/16/2017 11:56:00 AM
Very creative take on the theme John. Wonderful metaphor.
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:13:00 AM
Wonderfully stated the bumpy journey of life. Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 1/15/2017 9:02:00 PM
Great poetic devices used, John. Abstract and well-done. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/2/2017 9:53:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful my friend!!... Arlene
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Arlene, I think sometimes we spend so much time focused on the future we loose sight of the present..
Date: 12/31/2016 11:33:00 AM
I can picture Johnny Cash, if he were alive...singing this, John...should be a song...great stuff my friend...Happy New Year...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 1/1/2017 9:23:00 AM
Hey, WW, thanks for the high praise. I sang many a Johnny Cash song, usually off key and too loud .... but sing I did....
Date: 12/30/2016 6:04:00 PM
I like the rhythm of the poem as it starts click-clack down the track of life. The whole poem was fun to read and totally connected to the emotions of life that fights demons, misses beautiful sunsets, and experiences hopes never reached. Very well thought out. Good luck in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/1/2017 9:21:00 AM
Dane Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Glad you enjoyed the write. Your comment has me humming Johnny Cash's "I walk the line" as I reply
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