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15.08.2026

Anne-Lise Andresen
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End of Summer, Beginning of Fall 
Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place in the contest

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- End Of Summer -


      ask the drowned roses
      optimism was at its peak ~
      rain, rain and more rain
      fall with natural beauty
      embroidered with mouliné yarn
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Miller Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 8:12 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 4:18 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful tanka poem. 🥉
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Back with congrats on this gem
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write for a pretty picture. I love this wonderful time of the year. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win.............
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:51 AM
Beautiful picture beautiful words from your beautiful heart ❤️‍🩹
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Awesome artwork through the picture from which I guess you were writing this one. I enjoyed reading your lines which read like a very good contender to me. Way to go. 👏✍️👍. Sara K.
George Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:27 PM
Beautiful image and a lovely poem. The last line is striking with a captivating imagery. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 4:49 PM
I especially liked the last line! beautiful
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Gorgeous imagery to go with that awesome picture!🌹
Buehler Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:32 PM
A beautifully 'woven' tanka, Anne-Lise! I love the line about mouline yarn. Good luck in the contest.
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Your poem is so radiant and full of feeling. Lovely picture. Absolutely unique, with stunning natural scenery! Anne-Lise. Best for a win.
Rolland Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 10:55 AM
waw, this is emotional and luminous poetry, enjoyed your message
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:27 AM
"fall with natural beauty embroidered with mouliné yarn" -- Wow! Beautiful imagery. Totally original!
Godwin Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:02 PM
Very nice, Anne-Lise. I think you rocked it. I got nada gathering in my creative bits for this contest, not yet. CayCay
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 10:09 PM
Summer -> autumn time very berries to ripen, the rose though drowned will be back next year.
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Shame you had a bad summer Anne-Lise, seems we had your sunshine and you had our rain. Roll on autumn, I'm not built for extreme heat. Good luck in the contest. Tom🌹
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