End of Hope

I saw vultures circling above like 
seasoned acrobates looking around 
to see the message the dessert had sent. 
Their black outstretch wings seeking the
 heat of the day to soar using the updraft 
to avoid spending their limited strength. 
Looking down with marble looking eyes they
followed the familiar stench sent to them 
by hot steamy winds.

Other creatures had found the dinner 
the sands had prepared. Dragon-like 
blue beetles, red ants and coyotes 
devoured the strange looking carcass while 
the one-eyed blinding sun looked on.

The giant saguaros with numerous spiny 
arms stood like the Statue of Liberty trying 
not to see what laid in the bleached sand. 
Orange and black Gila monsters slithered 
underneath their trunks. 

Hairy red and black tarantulas were now 
making their homes inside the tennis shoes 
beside the remains. 

Hungry flies were swarming around the
blacken oily creature. They were the 
first to discover the carcass and had 
laid hundreds of seed-looking eggs 
which had grown to maturity. 

Their white greasy wiggling bodies fed on 
death. The desert had claimed another 
item to feed the many creatures of 
the wasteland.

The vultures circled closer and clumsily
 landed beside the blacken mass and all
 the other guests  departed. 

The yellow scorching sun looked on 
as Border Patrol vehicles roamed the 
desert to prevent unwanted guests 
from seeking a better life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 12:42 PM
This is a powerful write Carlos, the ending identifies the grim reality of those who fail on their journey for a better life
Blanca Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Fleming Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 11:47 PM
An amazing piece of writing...surely something you must have witnessed first hand methinks? Whichever, it is true to say that this fine prose is highly descriptive -- certainly makes an impact on the reader! My best regards, Carlos. :) john
Blanca Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:35 AM
John, No I have not seen scenes like I describe. I have however, talked to those who have and have tried to paint a picture. Your comments tell me my efforts were successful. Thanks.
Cresswell Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Fhis is a truth of the desert she is beautiful and deadly. She demands respect and caution. Your description is vivid and true. Very well done. I like your frankness.
Blanca Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Patricia. May this New Year bring you happiness and love.
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