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End of Days

...inspired by 'The Salamander' by C.S. Lewis The sun bore down with blinding rays, the oceans boiled and came to nought, it was withal the end of days with every living creature caught, when from the rocks, agile, adept, a tiny lizard meekly crept. With roughened skin and beady eye he reconnoitered through the haze, no stranger to a blazing sky it lay in shade, at last to laze, it raised his head, albeit weak, and rallied, then began to speak. "The Future of Mankind is sealed, the devil's bell has tolled and won, no recompense, no last appeal, eclipsed before you have begun to fight disease and lawlessness, the hallmarks of your wickedness. No light will break from yonder stars to help you in your hour of need, your destiny these blighted scars that seal your folly and your greed, alone with your predicament, God's only live experiment. To mess with Nature to your shame, to disregard His Holy Name, to vilify the Golden Rule will label you the Biggest Fool, death comes quick as you will see, the bell has tolled, and tolled for thee."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/25/2009 6:10:00 PM
How ironic that the last creature left on Earth is a tiny, weak reptile who speaks of "For Whom the Bell Tolls." Indeed, it tolls for all of us when we ignore God's natural order, exploit our natural resources and cast our "wickedness" on others. This is strikingly sad and poignant at the same time, Keith. Your language, as ever, is flawless and your concept both creative and frightening. (A lizard has taken residence on my couch. If he starts speaking to me, he's out the door.) Love, CD
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Date: 1/24/2009 11:55:00 AM
I absolutely loved this poem. SPEECHLESS
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:03:00 AM
This poem was great, I don't think I have read one yet; that a perfect formation of words. I could see a visual of what your words were trying to portray. GREAT POETRY! Vanessa Bailey
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:39:00 PM
excellent word usage, very descriptive. paints a wonderful picture. beats my "let it burn" by a mile
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Date: 11/27/2008 10:04:00 AM
I liked this rhyme of yours. Very descriptive. Thanks for your comments, and for sharing.
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:03:00 PM
A true, and chilling tale here, my talented friend. It would not be wise to be foolish in this regard. right now I am reading, the end of days, by Z. Sitchin, (the last in a long series) and that is what prompted me to read this one, and i was not dissapointed, love Kristin
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:16:00 AM
Vast message with playful and somber language, Keith! I enjoy the serious topic, the sense of judgement being handed down in the face of human darkness and conceit. "God's only live experiment" proves a wonderful turn of phrase! Thanks for the contemplative effort! Warm regards, John.
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