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Enclosed Rhyme of Heart

My muse said to me, “before I depart I’d write a poem of enclosed rhyme”. So it did in time and I heard it chime the tune of rhyme enclosed in my HEART. HEART became the horizon of nascent dawn, from its edge of vibrant pallet a new day rose, all the colors the brush of dream ardently chose. HEART saw the picture of sunburst love drawn. HEART in the embrace of spring zephyr swayed, the rhythm resonated with its sonorous beat, its surreal cadence had never been so sweet. HEART composed music of romance to serenade. HEART painted the patina of the scarlet sky, on the dew drenched petals of my garden’s rose I saw the facsimile of your florid face repose. HEART weaved the hovering tapestry of butterfly. HEART draped in the silver sheen of stardust hue pulsated at crescendo with symphony of ecstasy. Floating on rhyme of stellar lyric you came to me, HEART immersed in the moonbeam enclosed you.
February 23, 2019 Contest : Enclosed Rhyme Sponsored by : Emile Pinet January 9, 2020 Contest : Strand Select 7, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 3/25/2019 8:22:00 PM
Wow, only a poet can create such loving verses... Congrats Subimal, its a sublime piece.. loved the facsimile of face image
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you, Debjani for the compliment. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2019 10:06:00 PM
Subimal, I salute your persistence! Each stanza of your "Enclosed Rhyme of Heart" is lovely. Congratulations on your win on Mile 26 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 1 contest to go before the final! ~Mark
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Date: 3/27/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you, Mark for the placement.
Date: 3/6/2019 6:56:00 AM
I have read your enclosed rhyme work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/7/2019 12:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 3/5/2019 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Subimal! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Due to the exacting rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/5/2019 11:55:00 PM
Thank you, Emile for the placement.
Date: 2/23/2019 9:28:00 AM
Beautiful! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/5/2019 11:56:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for your visit.

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