Encircled

you weigh heavy on my mind these thoughts leave me breathless like this wind encircling me

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Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/19/2019 9:20:00 AM

Yes , some are so suffocating like the heavy winds making us breathless ....very nicely put.

Funom Makama

Date: 11/15/2019 8:51:00 AM

This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you so much :) hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/12/2019 2:35:00 PM

The power of thoughts, a force of nature...You can't deny

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Arturo....many forces in life we can't deny :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/12/2019 12:29:00 PM

Seems it must be windy everywhere today but what a wonderful way to see these November breezes. This was beautiful my friend. Sigh!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris .. the winds are brutal today ... i’d rather be wrapped in May’s winds :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/12/2019 12:07:00 PM

Winds here too today-I know you speak of different kind of winds--sunshine is just around the corner my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 1:10:00 PM

It’s these winds that inspired my write. It’s a numbing cold outside in their grasp. :) thank you my friend ... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2019 12:06:00 PM

- Accept all emotions, Sandra ... and the power of thought :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 1:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise. :) hugs